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t the same volume of responses as queries do but if you submit one i ll post it july 12 2010 at 7 16 am michelle massaro said thanks rick i know it s harder to get feedback on longer bits of writing but i d like to try before sending it out to the agents who want it with their queries shoot it s too long to post here it s a 2 page synopsis well it probably wouldn t have gotten any replies anyway but let me know if there s a way around the 4 096 character limit thanks again july 12 2010 at 12 04 pm dan ritchie said sorry for the double post i seem to be getting scripting errors lately july 13 2010 at 12 16 pm rick daley said dan no problem i ve had blogger give me grief moderating this blog and commenting on other blogs i posted the latter of the two it is scheduled to go up later this afternoon july 13 2010 at 12 26 pm rick daley said anon fledgling i caught your revision in the comments the post went up this morning and is already getting some more feedback good luck july 23 2010 at 12 37 pm amy blackwelder said this comment has been removed by the author august 1 2010 at 9 38 am amy blackwelder said this comment has been removed by the author august 1 2010 at 9 39 am amy blackwelder said this comment has been removed by the author august 1 2010 at 9 39 am amy blackwelder said this comment has been removed by the author august 1 2010 at 9 40 am anonymous said hey rick this is the poster of the previous comment the query for the land of endless night i need to fix something in the query before you post it so can you please just delete this comment and i ll send you the fixed version later thanks cari august 6 2010 at 3 08 pm rick daley said cari endless night gotcha i ll be ready when you resubmit august 6 2010 at 4 01 pm anonymous said re dead spell appears yonder query needs a heck of a lot of work please remove temporarily while i try to address that thanks august 25 2010 at 4 29 pm rick daley said anon dead spell author the post is down don t feel bad verrrrry few queries come out of the gate with an omg that was awesome if i were an agent i d sign you yesterday please re submit when you re ready august 25 2010 at 5 13 pm erin a said i submitted my query yesterday but i don t see it can someone help it s title is off the edge thanks september 2 2010 at 10 26 am rick daley said erin your query will post at noon est today september 2 2010 at 10 52 am ocean archer said please let me know if you see any areas where i can improve this query or if you like the original query on query shark better lmk all suggestions comments welcome washington post reporter avery bonelli became chiquita non grata when ex cia operative logan nash accused her of stealing national secrets two years later nash shows up in her apartment covered in blood promising a scoop that will get her back in the big leagues all she has to do is trust him desperate to get her career back on track avery helps nash investigate a terrorist bombing in maryland that killed his father and thirty two other scientists when the terrorist escapes justice on a technicality avery looks for answers and finds a conspiracy that reaches beyond domestic terrorism her investigation leads her to a group of cia operatives who engineered the bombing to shield one man from an fbi sting nash s father chief architect of a next generation biological weapon and he s still alive now avery is hunted by people who believe she s a threat to their weapons project and to the terrorist s true identity caught between assassins and a dogged determination for justice avery becomes a victim in her own story to stay alive she ll have to trust her life to logan nash who just might turn out to be the terrorist she s been tracking vicarious a 109 000 word espionage thriller can arm wrestle with mitch rapp while matching wits with kay scarpetta it s one of five finalists in the 2010 redacted contest on redacted enclosed is the first chapter prologue omitted thanks for your consideration ocean archer here s a link to some sample chapters for anyone who s interested click here september 25 2010 at 1 12 pm andrew rosenberg said this is an update for http openquery blogspot com 2010 09 query steam palace html sometimes meeting your evil twin makes you wonder which one you are in the world of steam palace new england shunned the revolution and formed the kingdom of new britannia in 1878 twins are separated at birth one to live with her abusive mother in poverty the other raised as a favored daughter of the court twenty three years later the courtly twin has lost her title her lands and the only means of supporting her family so she travels to hartford where she meets her double and it s hate at first sight the twins view each other as the enemy the evil twin to restore her family s station the courtly twin seeks the hand of an ambitious duke but her sister is his secret lover the duke pits the twins against each other while he plots with their country s enemies in search of the mythical sea key as enemy heavy dirigible bombers approach their respective homes the twins must first overcome their mutual loathing and then use their shared mad passion to defeat the duke and save new britannia from steam powered invaders by finding the sea key and unlocking its power steam palace a steampunk adventure is complete at 120 000 words i have completed a creative writing certificate course at the university of washington completed holly lisle s how to revise your novel online course and i co host a local critique group a couple other ideas for the hook line you meet your evil twin but who s to say you aren t the evil one mutually assured destruction is not how twins should treat each other thanks for your input i think it can should be shortened even more what do you think thanks rick for doing this october 14 2010 at 2 01 pm sara flower said rick sorry for the double post there would you be able to delete the first query i submitted and keep the second thanks a bunch october 25 2010 at 7 08 pm natascha said this is a little odd but i can t find anyone to critique my thriller and hoped i might be able to find someone here for some basic information my query has been posted on this site under all because of you if you re interested please contact me through my website www nataschanichole blogspot com or email posted on my website thanks october 25 2010 at 9 54 pm author dawn brazil said rick i just posted my query i hope i did this write this is an awesome site i hope more people learn about it november 4 2010 at 1 23 pm rick daley said thanks shelley got you covered january 10 2011 at 8 20 pm tvbutler said this comment has been removed by the author february 7 2011 at 10 43 pm johngb3 said dear rick great site and thanks for posting you can remove the query for curse of birth now february 19 2011 at 10 41 pm rick daley said thanks john just deleted the post february 20 2011 at 8 38 am zakariya sherman said hey rick just wondering if you could delete my post and sample pages for barefeet on little horton lane thanks http openquery blogspot com 2010 02 query barefeet on little horton lane html march 12 2011 at 10 27 pm mark said query reversal of providence 4th revision author s note sorry i could not figure out how to make italics work on the blog entry detain any witnesses and really prefacing bad man are meant to be in italics thanks for your comments ex army security expert ryan anderson thought it was just his bad luck when a careless truck driver rammed into his car he had no idea how deadly the truck s cargo was or that the men guarding it had been given very explicit instructions exterminate any witnesses but when the men from the truck hunt him down and brutally attack ryan retaliates with the help of attorney jessica webb turns out she s the smart one the one who figures out that it s not the chechen gang posing as a trucking company that they have to worry about but the really bad man who paid them to ferry his illicit shipment to seattle from half a world away working together ryan and jessica quickly realize that his seemingly random accident has thrust them into the middle of a sinister scheme set in motion decades ago by the fall of the soviet union they uncover a bloody trail that leads from washington to the sudan to moscow when jessica suddenly disappears turns out he s the brave one the one who knows that unless he can find her and stop the one man who started it all they ll both be dead by first light ashes actually reversal of providence is an 84 000 word thriller first in a series readers of authors like vince flynn frederick forsyth alex berenson and daniel silva might enjoy this book i have a ba in english from the university of iowa like my protagonist ryan anderson i am a security expert i own a business specializing in products for video surveillance thank you for reviewing this query march 13 2011 at 10 01 am rick daley said zakariya your query has been removed thanks for participating and best of luck with your writing march 13 2011 at 12 09 pm lydia kurnia said dear rick oopps i hope i posted it at the right place many apologies if i haven t thanks may 11 2011 at 4 30 am dennis yates said hi rick hope you are doing well i wanted to ask you a favor i would like to have my query for teriyaki samurai removed from this blog thanks again for providing a great place for writers to meet best wishes dennis yates may 27 2011 at 6 09 pm rick daley said hi dennis all versions have been removed thanks for participating and good luck with your writing may 28 2011 at 10 09 am chelsey said hey rick thanks so much for this can you take mine down please thanks chelsey july 2 2011 at 2 28 pm mj somers said this comment has been removed by the author july 9 2011 at 12 04 pm mj somers said this comment has been removed by the author july 9 2011 at 12 07 pm dy said query illusion modified rick seems like i made a bit of an error revising my synopsis before people had a proper chance to look at it i have an overactive send finger could you please take down my comment or post it as the second version many thanks dy loveday july 25 2011 at 3 07 am unknown said this comment has been removed by the author july 25 2011 at 3 42 pm unknown said this comment has been removed by the author july 25 2011 at 3 47 pm mj somers said hi rick this site has been so incredibly helpful for me in revising my query thank you so much for making it available to writers to grow and learn from could you have remove my queries for starved from the site at this point i d appreciate it thanks mike somers august 3 2011 at 10 13 am rick daley said hi mike both queries for starved have been deleted thanks for participating i m glad you found the experience valuable best of luck with your writing rick august 3 2011 at 10 17 am melanie faith said this comment has been removed by the author september 27 2011 at 3 20 am melanie faith said this comment has been removed by the author september 27 2011 at 2 37 pm l m miller said this comment has been removed by the author october 2 2011 at 1 03 pm tally said this comment has been removed by the author october 12 2011 at 10 44 pm tally said this comment has been removed by the author october 13 2011 at 6 02 pm fuck you said this comment has been removed by the author october 16 2011 at 11 09 pm fuck you said and i don t want to delete and repost again but i already see another mistake how is he ever going to defeat a bird i have was up there in the original post if you can please change that one word for me when you repost sorry i m a chuckle head october 17 2011 at 12 14 am rick daley said gone fishing no problem your query is up and the was is now an is october 17 2011 at 8 58 am fuck you said thank you october 17 2011 at 9 50 am fuck you said request can you delete all queries for mickey and the gargoyle thanks october 18 2011 at 10 45 am fuck you said my story has been getting rewritten and critiqued for 7 years what is wrong with the story and the query is that they re in my voice i wrote them in order to fix them i have to learn to write like someone else october 18 2011 at 11 33 am k l hallam said this comment has been removed by the author october 25 2011 at 12 03 pm shelley sly said hi rick happy new year thank you for hosting this blog it has really helped my query writing improve i am going to start querying soon and was wondering if you could please remove my early query draft of the queen of camp respecto posted in july of 2011 thank you so much and thanks again for this tremendously helpful blog january 1 2012 at 4 59 pm rick daley said fois i updated your post with the revised page january 17 2012 at 11 17 pm unknown said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator december 14 2012 at 3 42 am dusty walker said this comment has been removed by the author january 23 2013 at 4 09 pm dusty walker said this comment has been removed by the author january 23 2013 at 4 10 pm janelle brouet said picture book query dear agent in a dinosaur s grasp there are no second chances so a mouse hog and goat thwart his sneaky advances just how will this beast quell his great appetite if none of his friends will let him have a bite in the delicious romp aging raging gluttonosaurus an arthritic dinosaur uses odd tactics to trap dinner he mails invitations tries a meet and greet and even throws a tantrum but none of his antics work on the terrorized creatures of the forest and though he does not get exactly what he wants it leads to an unexpected delight hopefully you will find my main character and his story an engaging laugh out loud read i was inspired to write it after reading julia donaldson s the gruffalo although i make no comparisons thank you for your kind consideration may 28 2013 at 11 55 pm anonymous said who knew a couple of college credits could potentially cost them their lives six complete strangers take themselves out to the middle of nowhere alaska for the internship of the century only to be taken even farther away transported by forces beyond their wildest imaginations they wake up in a fantastical world full of deadly magic and a race of people at war they fight for their lives and their sanity as they struggle to find a way home without losing themselves in the process sybil toby axle jeremy luke and evie each has their own journey and each has their own fight their stories weave together across the continent of elandria changing its people forever for better and worse they fall in love and fight wars they seek to prove themselves and they try to flee from strange people that seek to suppress them their stories paint a portrait of a continent on the brink of collapse these six heroes were brought to elandria in order to save it and will at times both defy and follow an ancient prophecy that seems to define their lives children of earth is a 96 000 word new adult fantasy novel that is a cross between game of thrones and the 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