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r the one she needs when gemma learns kyle s secret her determination to protect it unfurls a chain of events that land her in a hospital bed aaron in handcuffs and kyle in a legal and ethical dilemma as he tries to clean up the mess they ve all made i have a b a in english from the university of texas my previous writing experience includes serving as a ghostwriter for life builders a nationwide mentoring ministry thank you for your time and for considering my novel sincerely genevieve wilson posted by rick daley at 7 52 pm 8 comments labels women s fiction mar 30 2010 query miranda s fire dear agent miranda dakin is a modern day fire mage three days shy of turning sixteen the age at which mages can compete in the tournament and use magic without supervision her already extraordinary life is turned upside down when a horde of supposedly extinct demons attack the tournament killing or kidnapping every adult mage after receiving a message from her psychic mage mother miranda is charged with rescuing the surviving mages from a place she was told doesn t exist she sets off on a cross country rescue mission with three others a young man belonging to a race she also thought extinct her witch of a best friend and a powerful young water mage she s known since birth an intimate betrayal public demon attacks and an unexpected affection complicate matters when all miranda wants is her mother safely back at home miranda grapples with a seductive ancient knowledge while discovering most of what she has been taught about her world is a strategic lie miranda s fire is a 60 000 word ya urban fantasy novel thank you for your consideration i look forward to hearing from you sincerely sarah n fisk posted by rick daley at 6 00 pm 2 comments labels urban fantasy young adult query for ya fantasy the destiny stone dear agent ploughing the fields was a part of daily life for seventeen year old haythem he dreams of adventure but never expects to leave turig until the day his mother appears a mother he grew up believing dead she pleads with him to leave at once telling him he needs to find the courage to embrace his destiny and to assume his rightful place among her people the elves haythem is curious to learn more and so he leaves taking with him an old map and a stone she cautions him to protect with the help of arygos a mysterious young man and tarquin an ancient creature of great wisdom haythem uncovers the truth about the stone and how the king s desire to possess it is connected to unrest in the empire he also learns the stone gives him the power to wield magic this newfound knowledge forces haythem to come face to face with the true legacy of the stone he is disturbed by what he discovers the stone is an extension of his own magic and if he is to have mastery over it he must bind himself to its will in order to rid the empire of the cruel king the destiny stone is a fast paced young adult fantasy and is complete at 115 000 words it explores the joy of love the pain of loss and the power of courage and sacrifice i have a m a in anthropology and have experience teaching university level sociology and anthropology courses thank you for your time and consideration aspiring writer posted by rick daley at 4 00 pm 1 comment labels fantasy young adult query diary of a hot pink party girl click here to read the sample pages in only a few months sixteen year old tawny childers has gone from major slacker to straight a student but convincing anyone that she s shed the hard core party girl reputation is going to take more than good grades her mother s commitment to give up drinking inspired tawny to change her own life while spending the summer in an anonymous support group tawny shares an unlikely friendship with star quarterback drew strunkler but when junior year begins neither can allow their very different paths to cross drew s father like tawny s mother is a recently recovered alcoholic but he s also a teacher at their school revealing coach strunkler s secret is too big a risk for tawny and drew to attempt an in school friendship not to mention drew s cheer bitch girlfriend and tawny share the common ground of complete hatred for one another now tawny s alone trying to find a new place among hundreds of students who see nothing but the easy girl any guy could nail at least that s what s written on the walls of the boy s locker room she s thrilled when the editor of the school paper requests her anonymous blog be a part of the warrior news hot pink party girl becomes a huge hit among her classmates tawny knows she s fooling them into seeing the ugliest side to her wild days alcohol drugs and more than a few random hookups when tawny s feelings for drew deepen it doesn t go unnoticed and only takes a little snooping for someone to discover the truth about drew s father and force tawny into telling her story the whole story hearing details about her past with the clarity of being sober is like reliving it and threatens to send her spiraling back to old habits the biggest challenge lies in convincing herself she truly isn t that girl and maybe she is worthy of having a guy like drew strunkler love her back or anyone for that matter diary of a hot pink party girl is a young adult novel complete at 80 000 words posted by rick daley at 2 00 pm 3 comments labels young adult query mend revised click here to read the original query he attacks he springs upon his victims with hatred and blind fury slashing their bodies and shredding the peace of the city too busy to hate he kills with no evidence left behind four atlanta families have fallen in his wake and he is not finished fifteen years have passed since the day jacob santos opened his eyes and found his mother brutally murdered for years he has been tormented by an unattainable desire for revenge unattainable until now following a murder in a downtown atlanta neighborhood a murder that mirrors his mother s jacob receives a message got another for you it is an invitation from the man jacob has spent his entire adult life envisioning killing a provocation to come out and play a deadly game of cat and mouse and jacob does just that the only help the self proclaimed investigator receives comes from an unorthodox source the ghost of a childhood friend that haunts both him and the killer alike hidden behind the specter s cryptic messages lays the true link between the hunter and the hunted and the only means to decipher which is which however unveiling the secret might come at too high a price for the lone investigator s fragile mind since the killer he so desperately seeks has never been further than a mere glimpse in the mirror now jacob must find a way to mend is fractured psyche before the police catch up to him before another family is slaughtered before his mind and his soul are lost forever he cannot fail doing so will turn him from the best hope to stop the killings and into the catalyst of an unprecedented murderous rampage posted by rick daley at 12 00 pm 4 comments labels crime query the destiny stone dear agent ploughing the fields was a part of daily life for seventeen year old haythem he dreams of adventure but never expects to leave turig until the day his mother appears a mother he grew up believing dead she pleads with him to leave at once telling him he needs to find the courage to embrace his destiny and to assume his rightful place among her people the elves haythem is curious to learn more and so he leaves taking with him an old map and a stone she cautions him to protect with the help of arygos a mysterious young man and tarquin an ancient creature of great wisdom haythem uncovers the truth about the stone and how the king s desire to possess it is connected to unrest in the empire he also learns the stone gives him the power to wield magic this newfound knowledge forces haythem to come face to face with the true legacy of the stone he is disturbed by what he discovers the stone is an extension of his own magic and if he is to have mastery over it he must bind himself to its will in order to rid the empire of the cruel king and fulfill his destiny the destiny stone is a fast paced young adult fantasy and is complete at 115 000 words it explores the joy of love the pain of loss and the power of courage and sacrifice i have a m a in anthropology and have experience teaching university level sociology and anthropology courses thank you for your time and consideration aspiring writer don t miss a beat get messenger on your phone posted by rick daley at 8 02 am 4 comments labels fantasy young adult mar 29 2010 query mourn their courage click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision liu jie fears losing family members more than anything so he raises an army when his nephew the ron emperor requires protection from yellow turban rebels with the help of aiyu an orphaned boy jie saved the rebels are destroyed however jie does not believe they were the emperor s true threat he suspects the imperial chancellor intends to usurp the throne rather than waging war and risking the lives of thousands jie attacks the chancellor during a chance meeting the attack fails and jie his family and aiyu flee continuing their struggle to survive amidst drought and warfare bitter loss continues to overshadow jie until he must choose between the safety of his family or his empire s survival mourn their courage is a 94 000 word fantasy based on chinese folktales collectively called the romance of the three kingdoms though adapted for film comics and video game serialization there are no modern english novelizations of this treasure mourn their courage may interest fans of eric flint cindy pon and guy gavriel kay and is similar in setting to kay s under heaven due april 27th i have published fiction in several online publications and am a member of the wuxia society and the china history forum online where i contribute book reviews i am also an active book reviewer on two blogs saving an orphan launches jie on an epic journey where ghosts are guides and heroes are traitors i invite you to experience mourn their courage thank you so much for this opportunity i look forward to your suggestions posted by rick daley at 10 36 pm 8 comments labels fantasy mar 26 2010 query snare college freshman chloe shepherd s knows that guys like dylan hughes don t fall for girls like her so when he seems equally smitten chloe is ecstatic and totally unprepared for the girl in the corridor she grills chloe about her date with dylan finishing with a terse don t like him too much the last girl who did ended up dead the words ring in chloe s head are they a warning or a sinister promise she can t ask dylan he doesn t speak to her now he won t even look at her as they sit next to each other in class yet months later dylan confesses that he s missed her and chloe dives headlong into his words despite his admission that the dead girlfriend is the least of it she s been waiting for this and if that explosive first kiss is anything to go by so has he but dylan warns her he s still not a good bet that hasn t changed he and his family are part of the great rayhm clan of witches the symbol of the clan burned into his skin is testament to how very powerful he is yet to chloe they are just two ordinary people falling extraordinarily in love who knows how long it might have stayed that way if she hadn t eavesdropped on him in the library now she realizes what he s been keeping from her for every secret he s revealed there s a deeper one because of her dylan will be forced to defend his birthright chloe is the only person in the world who can give him the one thing he s never wanted the power to rule the rayhm snare is a ya new adult paranormal romance complete at 94 000 words personal info below thank you for your consideration brenda st john brown posted by rick daley at 11 00 pm 5 comments labels paranormal romance young adult query iron thirst urban fantasy click here to read the last query trying something new here want to see if less is more or just more confusing dear most awesome agent ever the why i picked you paragraph looking for an escape from the norm felicity johnson dresses for trouble and finds it when she attends dragoncon the convention that celebrates everything sci fi and fantasy felicity meets a love interest discovers the dead body of a friend and stumbles over a real vampire who develops a thirst for the iron running through her veins the trip that started as a search for adventure leads her down a path that could leave her either dead or with the ultimate makeover one that can t be undone without a stake to the heart iron thirst is an 88 000 word urban fantasy i am a member of the atlanta writers club and sisters in crime sincerely would be nicest client ever posted by rick daley at 7 02 pm 9 comments labels urban fantasy sample pages diary of a hot pink party girl i should have known drew strunkler skunkler would morph into a big giant douche bag the second school started like i was just some fly he could flick right off his shoulder i mean seriously the guy wasn t even capable of intelligent thought as if to prove my point he was trying to kick a football over the roof of the school building with his other brainless jock friends i tugged at the collar of my shirt feeling the heat creep all the way up to my face ugh did my eyes actually light up when i saw him it didn t matter because drew strunkler was too busy winning a bet i wonder which pinhead will have to moon poor mrs elkin the librarian the book lady s gonna get another piece of ass today huh alex stoner slid into the bench beside me and i turned to him and laughed you would think she d wear a blindfold by now with all the butt cracks she s had flashed in front of her we watched drew back up his face tight with concentration the broad and brawny william peckman aka pecker with his tiny head and giant body held the football upright in the grass by his fingertips a guy that huge had to be covering some other insecurity like a small penis with a graceful swing of his leg drew s foot made perfect contact with the ball and it sailed over the roof damn pecker muttered drew punched him in the arm laughing like the stupid ass idiot he was somebody s dropping his pants today and just like that his eyes turned in my direction and paused tawny alex whispered did strunkler just look at you i shrugged but my heart was pounding yeah for about a quarter of a second alex flipped back the mop of dark curly hair falling in his eyes looked like he was checking you out like i care let s go inside its five minutes till homeroom i was nearly twenty feet away before i realized alex wasn t following he stood in the middle of the grass gaping at me like an imbecile what he shook his head and grinned sorry i m still not used to the good tawny the one who actually cares about being on time i ve been 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