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the public query slushpile 12 01 09 skip to main skip to sidebar dec 1 2009 sample pages in the clouds revisions 1 click here to read the query i m a fifteen year old girl being followed everywhere by a forty year old algebra teacher sounds creepy right but not insane at least that s the line i ve been feeding myself over and over since last ight i m not crazy despite the fact that i can t stop glancing over my shoulder checking if he s still there it s like i have tourette s or something but i have a real good excuse even better than teenage girl being stalked by middle age male teacher the man walking two steps behind me right now died yesterday morning it fact i witnessed his death and mr schuster and i aren t exactly bff s he hates me or hated me not sure which to use that s right alan schuster is dead he croaked bit the bullet and yet i don t find any pleasure in his absence because he s still here only i can see him i must be special or cursed i promise i m not normally this insensitive i even cried yesterday but the guy is driving me nuts he won t shut up what does a girl like me do when her dead teacher is tailing her and giving long lectures on why she should shut off the tv and get some homework done as if that were possible in my current mental state aka completely freaked here s what i did i walked to school this morning and headed straight to the guidance counselor s office where sanity has some kind of tangible measurement in other words he can tell me if i m nuts it was the only plan i could come up with after zero hours sleep and several minutes spent googling the phrase i see dead people the second i entered the school building i turned and headed up the empty staircase leading to the third floor i hadn t ever talked to dr cooper but i d seen him in the halls and knew where his office was what exactly are you trying to accomplish schuster asked in that sneering tone of his the sound made the already churning acid in my stomach move like the washer s spin cycle this was much worse than our usual bonding time of forty five minutes a day it was twenty four seven with that teacher you know the one i m talking about mine has geeky black glasses blonde hair combed to the side like a preschooler on the first day he s about six foot four and a scowl is permanently embedded to his face it travels all the way to his eyes everybody who s been to high school can name the teacher they dreaded most the one that caused them to slide down in their chair as low as possible praying they could go one day without being noticed now imagine taking that teacher home with you and everywhere else after only twelve hours i was nearly ready to check myself in to the psyche ward instead of heading to the nearest er i opened my mouth not usually a good thing given my tendency to speak then think normally the outbursts of profanities were directed at rude boys in gym class never a teacher can t you just shut up for five minutes i snapped it s bad enough i had to listen to you all night i haven t slept more than a few hours in two days i couldn t look at him but i m sure his face had that twisted angry purple look to it well maybe not purple anymore i shook my head trying to focus on sanity i needed sanity to get my questions answered otherwise who knows where i might end up i knocked on the door of room 312 then i saw the note next to the door in meetings this morning will return after 10 00am my panic level rose quickly this had been my only plan and nothing was solved going to class like everything was normal and ghosts weren t talking to me seemed like an impossible task i headed quickly down the steps and crawled underneath the stair case on the second floor before the halls became too crowded before anyone saw me it was my favorite hiding place and i couldn t go home to my big empty house with schuster in tow it was less eerie being surrounded by people even in hiding at least i knew they were there cutting class is against school policy schuster ranted on his giant feet paced back and forth in front of the staircase you would never listen to a teacher would you miss rollings of course not with that thick skull of yours i m surprised you can make it through an entire school day without a handful of detentions i couldn t maybe this was my punishment for being such an academic loser the past two days my life had taken a small turn for the positive i got a taste of success but it was wrong to claim honesty when several incidents of lying and cheating were involved maybe it was karma was this really what i deserved watching a man die right in front of my eyes and being condemned to have that man s voice ringing in my ears i was there when it happened the only one in the room i shouldn t have been there if i just let things go like usual and not allowed matt to help i wouldn t have been there that morning three days ago i dreaded walking in to this school building and facing schuster alive but now i would take that day over this one in a heartbeat everything started monday morning the root of my bad karma posted by rick daley at 3 00 pm 4 comments labels sample pages query in the clouds young adult fifteen year old jaycie rollings has the worst case of karma known to teenage girls she s being forced to spend every waking minute with a forty year old algebra teacher and to make things worse he s dead forty five minutes a day with a living mr schuster was bad enough for jaycie now he s following her and her boyfriend into their favorite make out spots she can t get any sleep at home with a ghost wandering around and boring world history class usually provided a good opportunity for a nap except now she has a dead teacher leaning over her shoulder threatening to sing show tunes if her notes on hitler aren t perfect mr schuster isn t exactly pleased with being condemned to follow a silly little girl around in fact of all the students he could be stuck with jaycie is his last choice but when he tries to leave her side everything turns black and the darkness shows nothing but misery and a loneliness no man could withstand it s a crazy game of tug o war and jaycie knows mr schuster must have some kind of unfinished business and figuring out what is keeping him around might be the only way to get rid of him its jaycie who makes the first move a truce to work with the man that made her dread every single day of ninth grade she opens up her world to him and he reluctantly does the same jaycie discovers a real person living beneath the hardened man with the permanent scowl she makes it her personal quest to ensure his life means something even after death in the clouds is a 65 000 word young adult novel posted by rick daley at 2 00 pm 6 comments labels young adult dark abyss paranormal romance a revision of this query has been posted click here to read it akali is a witch she just doesn t know it yet that is until she meets isaac her friendly kidnapper but besides being friendly isaac has other abilities that take him off the spectrum of being a normal run of the mill kidnapper as akali discovers his nature she also discovers her true heritage and purpose together they begin a whirlwind journey to stay alive and free isaac s family from an ancient curse dark abyss is complete at 105 000 words and available upon your request thank you in advance for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 11 09 am 6 comments labels paranormal romance newer posts older posts home subscribe to posts atom submit queries here submit queries here query and writing resources agentquery com genre descriptions agentquery com how to write a query colleen lindsay word counts and novel length critiquing critiques editorial anonymous tips on your bio janet reid effective query class janet reid how to make sure your query is instantly rejected janet reid what to do when an agent says no jessica faust slushpile agent interview jessica faust publishing dictionary nathan 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