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er father for help and agrees to sell her body as repayment every penny she earns goes into making up for his sacrifice but when trey discovers he hasn t been making the payments she s forced to turn to the one man she hoped never to see again as a deputy of the parkvista police department luke johnson refuses to acknowledge his high school sweetheart is a prostitute and is determined to make trey see it for herself that is until she starts treating him as a client his faith in his ability to know right from wrong is challenged and he isn t the only one who s noticed his brothers on the force don t have his back where trey is concerned leaving him to fight against them for a criminal the family is out to make her pay her father s drunken rages are getting worse and the town is cracking down on prostitution but what really has trey on edge is the fact she s falling for the deputy who wants her behind bars white trash beautiful is a romantic suspense short story complete at 17 000 words pub creds etc thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 10 13 pm 3 comments labels romance short story suspense feb 25 2011 query a human element 3rd revision commercial fiction click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision thank you for all your advice dear agent laura armstrong s special mind powers can t save her loved ones from being murdered and she must unravel her past to face the killer only to discover they are bonded by an explosive destiny that slammed into the earth 30 years ago a grief stricken laura returns home seeking answers she feels connected to the lake there where a meteorite crashed the night she was conceived the same night ben fieldstone s parents were crushed to death under it laura finds him at the lake searching for answers too drawn to one another ben and laura discover what fell from the sky long ago held more than just rock and that they are connected by fate when laura s true identity is revealed they find that the killer who wants her dead is part of their future spanning two worlds with the killer closing in laura fears she must use her powers and fight him alone or ben will die too like so many others she loved but if they survive she fears she can t give her heart to ben now that he knows who and what she really is i am seeking representation of a human element a 120 000 word suspense novel i would appreciate the opportunity to send you the entire manuscript thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 7 33 am 2 comments labels suspense feb 13 2011 commercial fiction query a human element 3rd version click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision dear agent laura can t escape death her parents were burned alive her best friend s throat was ripped out and her boss s brains were blown out across her face and she doesn t know why she fears the killer is the one who chases her in nightmares and she must stop him or be next the mystery could be connected to the meteorite that hit her hometown lake almost thirty years ago ben fieldstone thinks so he was there the night his parents were crushed under it laura finds him when she returns home to search the lake for answers drawn to one another they discover they are bound by fate as laura s true identity is revealed together they unravel her past to discover the man who wants her dead is part of a destiny she never could have imagined with the killer closing in laura realizes she must fight him alone to save them both but if they survive she fears she can t give her heart to ben now that he knows who she really is i am seeking representation of a human element a 120 000 word suspense novel i would appreciate the opportunity to send you the entire manuscript thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 10 00 am 2 comments labels suspense jan 19 2011 query supernatural first revision click here to read the original query abbie liddell loves research hates shrinks and should be able to communicate with the dead abbie has a psychic gift but it s buried within a repressed memory sure she s moved to the queen anne institute of parapsychology to uncover it it s just safer not to plus why worry about her own past when she could be snooping through the institute s especially when it looks like the institute is covering up another recruit s murder but as she s looking into them she finds they re watching her and they re not the only ones ballard is sexy and dangerous and abbie wants nothing to do with him but he s been watching abbie her whole life watching her in visions of the future and her future looks worse than her past the institute is desperate to contact a spirit desperate enough to perform a procedure on abbie in three days to crack open her gift they don t care if it leaves her dead remembering the two weeks her mind banished from her psyche in order to protect itself sixteen years ago may leave her wanting to die but not remembering will kill her supernatural is an adult paranormal suspense it is complete at 125 000 words thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 6 25 pm 5 comments labels paranormal suspense jan 18 2011 query supernatural abbie liddell takes two pills two times a day she takes two in the morning to numb the fear she takes two at night to sleep she swallows them in secret the parapsychology institute where she lives forbids prescription medications prescriptions only repress psychic gifts and the institute doesn t dabble in the ordinary abbie should be trying to uncover her gift to communicate with the dead but it s just safer not to her ability is buried within a repressed memory of the two weeks she went missing when she was eight and the mind buries these things for a reason the institute s other recruits should know one recruit s gift surfaced because of an event that broke her so bad she tried to drown herself in the mississippi river when another recruit s gift surfaced he realized taking another person s life good or bad changes someone takes something away from your soul or puts something else in the other recruits haven t been the same since but the institute is desperate for abbie to contact a spirit so desperate they will perform a procedure on her in three days to crack open her gift they don t care if it leaves her dead remembering the two weeks her mind banished from her psyche in order to protect itself sixteen years ago may leave her wanting to die but not remembering may kill her supernatural is a paranormal suspense it is complete at 125 000 words thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 7 21 pm 6 comments labels paranormal suspense dec 23 2010 query all because of you fourth revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision click here to read the third revision dear agent name forced to commit murder in order to survive adelaide banvard can t rid herself of the demon in her mind faithful to the end she s stood at the side of christian wren one of the most powerful men in los angeles and the only asset capable of keeping her violent tendencies at bay for the past ten years she s been dedicated to his cause the schizophrenic monster in her head enjoying every moment of pain delivered and every drop of blood on her hands as she grows eager to take control of her own life one that doesn t consist of orders and demands her opportunity comes in the form of atf agent marcus grant a man whose assignment is to apprehend wren the suspected leader behind one of the largest gunrunning operations california has ever seen adelaide s loyalties are tested at every turn as she fights her way out of wren s organization battles the illusions in her head and tries to conceal the attraction she feels for the atf agent who wants her for murder all because of you is suspenseful commercial fiction complete at 75 000 words i have a degree from utah valley university in the field of psychology owning accurate knowledge on the subject of schizophrenia i have included whatever they request per your submission guidelines thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 7 58 am 5 comments labels commercial fiction suspense nov 7 2010 query all because of you third revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision dear awesome future agent forced to kill for sport until the age of sixteen adelaide banvard has been kept at the side of christian wren one of the most powerful men in los angeles and the man she feels indebted to for saving her life for ten years she s been dedicated to his cause the schizophrenic monster in her head enjoying every moment of pain delivered and every drop of blood on her hands but adelaide finally has the chance to escape this existence of violence eager to live a life of her own her opportunity comes in the form of atf agent marcus grant a man whose assignment is to apprehend wren the suspected leader behind one of the largest gunrunning operations california has ever seen adelaide s loyalties are tested at every turn as she fights her way out of wren s organization and tries to conceal the attraction she feels for the atf agent who wants her for murder all because of you is an 85 000 word suspense i have a degree from utah valley university in the field of psychology owning accurate knowledge on the subject of schizophrenia and would be glad to send you my complete manuscript for your review thank you for your time and consideration and i look forward to hearing from you soon posted by rick daley at 10 37 am 4 comments labels suspense oct 13 2010 query all because of you second revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision dear awesome future agent forced to kill for sport until the age of sixteen adelaide banvard has been kept at the side of christian wren one of the most powerful men in los angeles and the man she feels indebted to for saving her life for ten years she s obeyed his every command and whim the schizophrenic monster in her head enjoying every moment of pain and every drop of blood on her hands but adelaide finally has the chance to escape this life of violence her opportunity comes in the form of atf agent marcus grant a man whose assignment is to apprehend wren the suspected leader behind one of the largest gun running operations california has ever seen adelaide s loyalties are tested at every turn as she fights her way out of wren s organization and the attraction she hides for the undercover atf agent who wants her behind bars for murder all because of you is an 85 000 word suspense i have a degree from utah valley university in the field of psychology owning accurate knowledge on the subject of schizophrenia and would be glad to send you my complete manuscript for your review thank you for your time and consideration and i look forward to hearing from you soon regards me posted by rick daley at 11 04 pm 2 comments labels suspense oct 11 2010 query all because of you first revision click here to read the original query forced to kill for sport until the age of sixteen adelaide banvard has been kept at the side of christian wren one of the most powerful men in los angeles and the man who saved her life for ten years she s obeyed his every command and whim the schizophrenic monster in her head enjoying every moment of pain and every drop of blood on her hands but adelaide finally has the chance to escape this life of violence her opportunity comes in the form of atf agent marcus grant a man whose assignment is to apprehend wren the suspected leader behind one of the largest gun running operations california has ever seen adelaide s loyalties are tested at every turn as she fights her way out of wren s organization the power wren holds over her and the attraction she hides for the undercover atf agent who wants her behind bars for murder all because of you is an 85 000 word contemporary and suspenseful women s fiction novel i am an active member in the las vegas romance writer s chapter of romance writer s of america and have a degree from utah valley university in the field of psychology i have accurate knowledge on the subject of schizophrenia and would be glad to send you my complete manuscript for your review thank you for your time and consideration and i look forward to hearing from you soon sincerely me posted by rick daley at 1 00 pm 4 comments labels suspense women s fiction oct 10 2010 query all because of you dear agent name i am writing to you because i believe my 85 000 word contemporary suspenseful women s fiction novel all because of you would be appropriate for your agency kidnapped at the age of seven adelaide banvard has been forced to kill her entire life she s kept at the side of christian wren one of the most powerful men in los angeles but after ten years finally has a chance to escape her opportunity comes in the form of atf agent marcus grant a man whose assignment is to apprehend the leader behind one of the largest local gun running operations california has ever seen his loyalties are tested at every turn as he fights his way through wren s organization and his second in command but adelaide isn t everything she seems her schizophrenic mind superb combat skills and exquisite beauty fascinate marcus beyond control leading his investigation into hot water and into adelaide s own little world thank you for your time and consideration blah blah blah sincerely me posted by rick daley at 9 55 am 6 comments labels suspense women s fiction jun 9 2010 query bait revised click here to read the original query nothing was more important to aubrey than gaining her freedom but the one man who could give it to her was the last man on earth she could trust aubrey donovan was a successful horse trainer until wrongfully convicted of the vicious slaying of her sister savannah three years behind bars has left her with a seething hatred for the justice system and anyone associated with it special agent levi bishop is head of the fbi task force charged with catching a serial killer dubbed sandman by the press after a year of chasing shadows the bodies of sandman s victims are still turning up but levi is no closer to catching him a break in the case leads levi to aubrey and he realizes immediately that not only was she wrongfully convicted she was likely sandman s intended victim the night her sister was murdered racing against the clock and running out of options levi hates using aubrey as bait but knows it s the only way to bring sandman to justice that s the premise of my recently completed 90 000 word novel bait this gritty suspense tale reminiscent of tami hoag and sandra brown explores murder distrust and impossible attraction in a small louisiana town my 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