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ptured by werewolves and given a drug named the cure now he is human and has no memory of the past two thousand years with less than sixty vampires in existence and graham being one of the three original creators his disappearance doesn t go unnoticed for long the wolves stationed graham in an apartment just outside the city and as the first subject the cure has successfully changed he is closely monitored by his kidnappers when graham s vampire companion karl discovers his location he must find a way to get close enough to his friend to remove the drug induced transformation after the cure is forcibly removed and the human side effects begin to wear off graham must accept the creature he is but the terrifying changes from human to vampire are enough drive him to the wolves seeking a normal life but the experiment he underwent has been ruined and now the werewolves want him dead with no other choice graham is forced to return to his vampire friends and attempt to go back to a world he doesn t remember yet my contemporary fantasy novel on the surface complete at 79 000 words is about a man striving to learn about his past and then cautiously coming to terms with the creature he turns out to be i received my b a in english writing from omitted and have had short non fiction pieces published on a locally based website omitted thank you for offering your time to read a little about on the surface sincerely omitted posted by rick daley at 8 20 am 4 comments labels fantasy may 1 2012 query damsel to the rescue dear agent i thought you might be interested in damsel to the rescue a gender role bending ya fantasy adventure terrilyn darkhorse comes from a long line of successful prince rescuing damsels now that she s sixteen she s expected to uphold the family tradition but terri dreams of being a gardener and would rather remain at home tending her garden perfecting her plant magic and staying far away from the highly competitive world of damsels then the local prince is kidnapped and terri s mother makes her an offer beat the other damsels and be the one to rescue the prince and terri can have the family s second estate trellis to turn into her own gardens terri has wanted trellis since she was a little girl so she sets out with her best friend rune as her official sidekick hoping to avoid the other damsels altogether before long terri and rune are set upon by hordes of trolls and find themselves rescuing rival damsels from man eating trees as the onslaught of enemies grows terri learns to rely on her magic and an unexpected source of aid her rivals to conquer each challenge because she is determined to succeed even if it means coping with snotty elf princesses chainmail bikinis and the most powerful dark lord the world has seen in five hundred years damsel to the rescue is complete at 83 000 words it will appeal to readers who appreciate tamora pierce s strong heroines and patricia c wrede s quirky sense of humor included are the materials you request in your submission guidelines thank you very much for your time sincerely posted by rick daley at 1 01 pm 5 comments apr 27 2012 query modern medicine revised click here to read the original query medical charts tell only a skewed fraction of what actually occurs during a patient s hospitalization contained within this file are the complete stories of what befell seven patients treated at the university hospital and their role in transforming an innocent medical student into not just a physician but something much darker raj mok never knew colostomies could be prostituted cancers infested by maggots or that ten is the most lethal number until he began medical school having spent more time interviewing prostitutes than treating heart attacks raj s first year of clinical medicine taught him one thing outrageous patients make for excellent training seven patients six stories one hospital not for the faint of heart posted by rick daley at 6 39 am 4 comments labels medical thriller mar 30 2012 query king s mark revised click here to read the original query hi all someone suggested i try the query from one of my other pov characters since it s an epic fantasy i just happen to have 3 of equal weight to choose from here s a completely different query for the same book thanks in advance for your thoughts chay isn t blind he s just pretending to be some street flies fake disabilities to earn sympathy and extra coin but that s not why chay took up the blindfold he did it to hide the birthmarks that identify him as the lowliest scum in the city a marked servant to the absent king if he slips up and someone realizes what he is he ll be starved tortured and killed as a traitor chay will do anything to protect his family of guttersnipes from taking a beating to blackmailing a member of the broken court the city s underground society his super human intuition usually warns him of trouble before it arrives and keeps him one step ahead of his enemies but it can t protect him from his own bad choices when chay picks a fight with a rival in order to protect a new find it escalates and triggers the deeper magic lying dormant within him although he struggles to remain free chay knows it s only a matter of time before he s caught but he doesn t expect to be betrayed by one of his own in return for food and safety for the rest of the ring luckily for chay his captor is a rebel leader who has no interest in dealing with the authorities instead he wants to use chay s newfound powers as a rallying point for his insurgency chay finds he has talent and passion for stirring up trouble he sets out to make a better world because though he s angry with his traitorous friend he s furious with society itself but the government is the least of his worries another enemy hides in plain sight and the rebellion is playing right into her hands king s mark complete at 90 000 words is a stand alone epic fantasy with room for a sequel additional material is available upon request thank you for your time and consideration and thanks again everybody here at pqs posted by rick daley at 10 15 am 9 comments labels epic fantasy feb 27 2012 query 2 0 a temporary convenience click here for the original query the language here hasn t been polished i m just trying to see if i m moving in the right direction without further ado beth macdonald is inexplicably rescued from the world of temp work with an offer of lucrative permanent employment from successful art dealer dorie campbell the next day mrs campbell s gorgeous and über rich accountant appears at the shop and quickly launches into ardent and confident pursuit perhaps now beth can tell her parents that her ph d in pre modern scottish history wasn t career suicide and not everyone thinks she s a pedantic wiseass or at least someone finds that trait endearing she could be so happy if only she didn t suspect her new boss her new beau or both are up to no good it sure seems as if they re covering something up beth s predecessor supposedly trashed the inventory records and has gone missing the records beth reassembles are cryptic duplicative and inconsistent and are promptly snatched away by mr campbell the irs is sniffing around as are a couple members of a reputed mob family the campbells are commonly believed to have a thriving a horse business but their big barn is almost empty meanwhile their supposedly empty guesthouse is occupied and a friend emails beth to report mr perfect is a bad boy who may have an ulterior purpose or three for his sudden infatuation the last time a macdonald trusted the bloody campbells didn t work out that well beth doesn t want to blow this first chance at permanent employment but she doesn t want to work for crooks either particularly not when they re suddenly determined to go into business with her father she knows she has to figure out if the campbells are crooked and if so what crimes are involved she just needs to avoid whatever happened to mrs campbell s last assistant also once wooed by the stunning accountant a temporary convenience a 104 000 word mystery full of sarcasm scotch sexual obsession and a bit of shakespeare is able to stand alone but intended as part of a trilogy thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 3 22 pm 11 comments labels mystery feb 26 2012 query a temporary convenience life is frustrating for beth macdonald as her attorney father says a law degree would have yielded better employment opportunities than a ph d in pre modern scottish history her mother declares beth s moribund love life is due to her unwillingness to eat meat or to stop being such a pedantic wiseass then successful art dealer dorie campbell inexplicably rescues beth from the world of temp work with an offer of lucrative permanent employment a day later gorgeous über rich ted bruce the campbells friend accountant and banker appears at the shop and quickly launches into ardent and confident pursuit beth can t take solace in either development at work she faces confusing files an irs accountant telling her to quit her father s mob family client asking for a favor and lies from dorie and her husband piling ever higher meanwhile a friend emails beth to report his former classmate ted is a bad boy who may have an ulterior purpose or three for his sudden infatuation with her unfortunately no one can find dorie s previous assistant a woman ted once wooed the last time a macdonald trusted the bloody campbells didn t work out that well but running away wouldn t protect her or her family and would give the campbells a pass she knows she has to investigate and resist the hot mr bruce who might be part of the campbells schemes if schemes there be the last bit will be harder a temporary convenience a 104 000 word mystery full of sarcasm scotch sexual obsession and a bit of shakespeare is able to stand alone but intended as part of a trilogy thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 10 45 am 15 comments labels mystery feb 10 2012 query lestoor s chosen dear oh all mighty agent after amarris watches blood collectors slit a boy s throat she wants nothing more than to escape her destiny as the mezaran empire s future leader she cuts her hair disguises herself as a boy and apprentices with a thief a man who rescues sacrificial slaves as a pastime but her new life doesn t quench her blood burning addiction and the empire won t just let her go amarris is the empire s most talented lestari able to absorb human blood and create divine fire she can create invisible fire fire that consumes any material and even fire that burns out another lestari s powers if her master knew what she was he d probably kill her and creating fire comes with a price steeper than blood the more fire amarris uses the more the mezaran god manipulates her until she s not sure which thoughts are still her own when she discovers the empire plans to invade darsia the only country that s ever repelled it she crosses the ocean in an attempt to both break her ties with the mezaran god and to warn them but her penchant for thievery entangles her in darsia s tempestuous politics and she s increasingly unsure of who she can trust amarris arsenal whittles down to one weapon divine fire if she runs the empire will kill everyone she s come to care about if she fights she risks succumbing to the mezaran god destroying the people she is trying to save and losing her free will in the process lestoor s chosen is a fantasy novel that is complete at 140 000 words this novel is a stand alone work with trilogy potential thank you for your time posted by rick daley at 10 36 pm 4 comments labels fantasy jan 31 2012 query king s mark there is nothing leti loves better than hunting along the river and practicing his stone carving until now his clan s protection has allowed him to do just that but when visiting traders discover the otter print birthmarks on leti s hands they kidnap and smuggle him into a hostile city where the king s mark is the sign of a traitor and the steward doesn t tolerate traitors instead of being executed leti is sold to a rebel leader who plans to use leti s existence as a rallying point leti escapes only to find his home destroyed and his clan scattered killed or sold into slavery instigating change suddenly becomes personal aided by another marked a ruthless charismatic guttersnipe turned revolutionary leti begins to work with the insurgency little does he know that the steward is the least of his worries another enemy hides in the shadows and the rebellion is playing right into his hands king s mark complete at 90 000 words is a fast paced epic fantasy additional material is available upon request thank you for your time and consideration and thank you rick blog commentators for your feedback posted by rick daley at 3 00 pm 5 comments labels epic fantasy query coming of the dukebarr revised click here to read the original query query revision to coming of the dukebarr now called coming of the durstorung or any other evil apocalyptic sounding name dear cara a rebellious and stubborn fifteen year old has recently decided that there is no creator her beliefs if discovered are considered high treason and grounds for exile in her village desperate to protect his daughter the high priest confronts cara about her beliefs but she refuses to conform and runs away she finds shelter with an old man in the hills another non believer who was exiled from the village years ago by the time her father finds her she has become close friends with the heretic when cara is dragged away from her new friend and forced to return home an apprentice priest leolin is assigned to babysit cara and help recover her faith he follows her to school and watches closely as she completes her chores all while extolling the virtues of the creator needless to say cara isn t pleased but her anger is quickly forgotten when foretold signs of a coming apocalypse the durstorung begin to appear the village animals are slaughtered lightning from clear blue skies burn down multiple houses cara is frightened by the events and is relieved when the old man arrives in the village looking for shelter after his cottage was burned down but before she can confide in her friend the durstorung arrives the villagers flee from the devastation and shelter in nearby caves praying for redemption the durstorung is a blur no one can remember what happened or how but they all believe the creator has decided to end the world and there is nothing they can do to save it the food supplies in the cave won t last till the end of the week cara however realizes something is amiss why do people have claw marks on their arms and why were the animals slaughtered like prey she tells everyone that the durstorung might be a magical beast and tries to organize a scouting party but only the old man believes her leolin refuses to let her out of his sight and cara is furious with time running out 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