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where to turn a decision needs to be made if he gives in to his hurt and turns away from god he s essentially giving up on his town and those he loves but if he turns to god that means he has to accept a loss he blames on god and to him it means giving in or does it 7 days to redemption completed at 77 000 words is a supernatural suspense in which a pastor s faith in god is tested and his trust in his sister is betrayed for those who loved the earlier novels of ted dekker i have a feeling they would enjoy my novel since it has the same feel i won the 2005 word alive publishing contest with my novel once upon a dream and i hold a degree in theology as well i am a member of the word guild and the acfw if you would like to consider 7 days to redemption i d be more than happy to forward the complete manuscript to you thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 4 44 pm 6 comments labels supernatural suspense query beth not the actual title when the exclusive hamilton arts academy offers 17 year old rocker beth collins a scholarship she leaps at the chance but it s not her killer guitar skills that catches their eye hamilton is a school for talented in other words freaks like beth who s talent is for causing death at will at hamilton beth finds new love camaraderie and training to control her dangerous abilities but behind the school s supportive facade lurks an unknown evil someone wants to exploit her deathmage talents for their own hellish plans with no one to trust beth must face down demonic powers and master her deadly skills or succumb to those who would destroy her along with everyone she loves posted by rick daley at 9 30 am 12 comments labels guess the genre feb 12 2010 query the nameless dear agent what s in a name more than you can imagine the days passed in unbroken tedium for erica ann dawson the eighteen year old girl left behind in the sleepy town of batesfield connecticut after the diaspora of her friends and classmates to various colleges and universities across the country afraid to strike out on her own and warm in the blanket of her own complacency erica is content to sit back and watch the world go by but after a bizarre recurring dream erica s peaceful life begins to unravel at the seams she begins blacking out awakening hours even days later with no memory of what had transpired in the intervening time as the blackouts grow worse she begins to doubt her own sanity until she learns the truth erica is slowly being replaced being usurped from her own life by a creature known only as a changeling to save herself from being completely consumed by the changeling and vanishing forever she is forced to make a terrible sacrifice erica gives up her name and with it relinquishes all rights to her own identity now nameless and forgotten by the world the girl must learn to harness a strange new ability to fight back against the changelings and the dark force invading batesfield will she be strong enough to overcome the mysterious master of the changelings and reclaim what she has lost or will she remain nameless forever the nameless is a ya fantasy novel complete at 60 000 words the manuscript is available upon request thank you for your time and consideration sincerely emily xxxxxxx address telephone email posted by rick daley at 11 38 am 6 comments labels fantasy young adult feb 11 2010 query sienna dear agent the need to protect her sister from their abusive father weighs heavily on 10 year old sienna s mind one night out of desperation sienna informs her mother that her father has been sexually abusing her this assertion leads to the murder of her father by her mother covering up the murder as an accident sienna s mother says it is sienna s fault and orders her to leave and never return sienna s grandmother takes her in now 15 years later sienna s life appears to be full there s only one thing lacking and that is love and love is one thing that she does not trust one day sienna s best friend and next door neighbor chantal wins tickets to a rock concert sienna is not really interested in going but chantal will not take no for an answer david black is a rock star he is secretly married to a woman he does not love and he becomes captivated with sienna when he sees her sitting in the front row at one of his concerts he invites her back stage to meet him eventually sienna and david fall in love when david asks sienna to accompany him on the last leg of his concert tour she agrees unfortunately david fails to mention his married state to sienna and she finds out she quickly heads for home on a greyhound bus more convinced than ever that love has nothing but hurt for her when she gets home she discovers that her sister whom she has not seen or spoken to in 15 years has left a phone message that their mother has died sienna must now travel back to the home where the horror of her childhood was played out and to the sister that she left behind what she doesn t know is that david is right behind her and determined to win her back sienna a romance novella is complete at 35000 words sincerely rpt posted by rick daley at 10 38 pm 6 comments labels novella romance query the butterfly key revision 5 click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision click here to read the third revision click here to read the fourth revision dear agent shortly after christian bryson promises to fulfill his wife s dream of starting a family his army reserve unit deploys for war in battle christian sustains a wound which renders him incapable of fathering children devastated christian agonizes over telling his wife abigail about his infertility for fear of ruining her dreams of motherhood christian blames his calamity on the so called providence of god and wishes death would have taken him haunted by a promise he can no longer keep and dreading abigail s reaction christian keeps silent about his impairment what christian doesn t comprehend is abigail will accept him with unconditional love no matter what albatross she s forced to bear when abigail tearfully pleads for him to come home from the hospital christian refuses in his heart he believes he is no longer the husband she deserves god however believes otherwise and intervenes he sends two special travelers one alive the other not to help christian allay the anguish within his soul with the guidance and love of god s sojourners christian realizes he needs to go home and apologize to abigail upon christian s return to his wife he s overcome with joy for god has a plan in everything he does when he graces christian with an unexpected gift the butterfly key is a 72 000 word work of christian fiction thank you for your time and consideration regards a d n posted by rick daley at 8 37 pm 5 comments labels christian fiction query descent into darkness revision 1 click here to read the original query dear agent when aiden s ability to use the dangerous and forbidden art of dark magic spontaneously manifests during an intense argument with his fiancée his dream to marry and start a family is torn asunder betrayed to the church by the woman he loves and sentenced to a lifetime of imprisonment aiden finds salvation in the least likely of places the shadow the dreaded evil army that seeks to bring chaos and destruction to the land but in order to achieve his revenge aiden has to face challenges beyond just acquiring the pieces of the key that will free the shadow lord from hell his ex fiancée joins the forces of the very church he is fighting against and a heated rivalry soon forms between aiden and the ruthless commander of the shadow himself both for the power they both desire and for love descent into darkness is a 129 500 word work of fantasy it is the first in a series of two books the second of which is currently in progress thank you for your consideration sincerely author posted by rick daley at 8 09 am 5 comments labels fantasy feb 10 2010 a successful query kiersten white posted a successful query on her blog you should check it out the book she queried didn t sell but it landed her an agent and she does have a publishing contract now for another book it s nice of her to share her steps on the path to publishing success posted by rick daley at 9 38 am no comments labels successful query feb 8 2010 query absorption dear agent x as a young medic brett johnson saw the atrocities perpetrated by the hive mind alexander a decade later the space force has sent him to the planet oceania where the nanotechnology alexander was based upon was developed oceania is home to the oldest and largest hive mind in existence and the planet has derived many economic and medical benefits from it brett s job is to convince the oceanians that even those who voluntarily became part of the hive mind don t fully understand the peril to their humanity and that they must allow the nanotechnology and everything based on it to be destroyed rather than forcing the federalist worlds to fight a bloody war against them he is also supposed to learn as much as possible about oceanian technology and government to help win a war if one is inevitable at first brett believes deeply in his mission then he rashly seduces a beautiful woman knowing this may interfere with his mission yet believing it the only way to distract her from giving her soul to the hive mind with her help he learns more about oceania than his superiors could have hoped but begins to question what he s been told is the hive mind truly a malignant entity seeking to trick humans into building the tools it needs to devour them or a collaborative tool enabling people to perform superhuman feats of intellect he can only know for certain by becoming part of the supermind if he was right all along and no individual can ever leave he will never know what he s lost and those who hear his report may not understand until it s too late if the federalist worlds have completely misunderstood what s at stake it may well be too late to convince them and the home world of the woman he loves may be wracked by a devastating and unnecessary war absorption is an eighty thousand word science fiction novel please write me for a full or partial manuscript i received my mls from the state university of new york at albany grateful regards david weisman posted by rick daley at 2 45 pm 7 comments labels science fiction feb 7 2010 sample pages am i worth it click here to read the first sample page submission click here to read the second sample page submission click here to read the most recent query just a side note its been a few months since i posted a revision of this story because i got really frustrated trying to revise what already existed finally i decided to tone down the mc and give him a little more mystery in the first chapter i still don t know if its the right place to start but at least i m no longer stuck i attempted suicide exactly once a day twice would be excessive it would lose its value i was starting to think it already had and i was starting to like it here enjoying a blistering cold november in chicago after spending my entire seventeen years in california was not part of my plan i should hate my life right now but i didn t and it was so wrong for me to be happy i made my usual climb up the rocky wall my hands numb from the cold wind but the feeling was exhilarating i couldn t deny that san jose had such mild weather compared to this the way the bitter cold steals your breathe stings the tips of your fingers and toe it was fascinating when i reached the top of the mound of giant rocks i looked out at lake michigan spread before my eyes it wasn t california but damn it was beautiful even with the bite of a cold winter i closed my eyes and i was there again with her the girl i was sentenced to spend a lifetime with every weekend it s the same fucking thing get drunk and party maybe hook up with some random girl don t you ever get tired of it i glanced over at my friend he wasn t even listening he was watching a group of girls dancing hey dan someone s checking you out trenton sang he handed me another shot glass of whiskey and pointed at a short girl with dark hair across the room what s her name hailey or something i asked trenton laughed and shook his head how many shots have you had you never forget anyone s name six shots hannah i remembered he moved beside me leaning against the counter what do you say i don t think you d have any trouble getting in that girls pants she totally wants you i laughed and my head spun even more you re such an ass trent if i were a chick there would be a warning label tattooed across your forehead i d make sure of that we can t all be as god damn charming as you he said i rested my head in my hands massaging my temples wishing i hadn t drank so much exactly thirty seconds later i got a whiff of perfume hannah fuentes i said without lifting my head dan anderson she answered giggling one strike against her already giggling girls were a little bit of a turn off for me or maybe they just seemed fake rehearsed so you remember me she asked i lifted my head meeting her brown eyes yes we had biology freshman year you sat in the third table on the window side of the room next to byron silverman her face lit up with a look of excitement possibilities i cursed myself silently now she was going to think i spent the past two years dreaming about watching her bend over to pull a pencil out of her bag or something see what i mean god damn charming trent muttered as he walked away you want to dance she asked damn why didn t i go home early like a good little senator s son okay she grabbed my hand and pulled me to the middle of the giant living room with the rest of the drunken upper classman the music was fast and loud the beat the lights my spinning head none of it allowed me to think clearly and i knew this wouldn t end well then she was kissing me her tongue dancing around in my mouth it wasn t a bad kiss but it wasn t love and it should be the vibration coming from my pocket shook me out of this morning ritual my pounding heart slowed just a little before i flipped open the phone hi steve dan where are you i got up at five thirty and you were gone did you go out last night he asked putting on his concerned uncle hat do i ever go out no well anyway i have a favor to ask i groaned more out of habit than real distress it ll get you out of first period he taunted alright i sighed and start to climb down not today i was still a fucking coward again i walked in to the audio visual room a few minutes late a blond haired woman stood in front of the t v with a notebook and a pen she was the only one in the room are you christian i asked she continued to stare at the t v no i m atheist my parents are catholic i laughed okay and you don t have a french accent either nope sorry but i could give it a shot i walked over and stood beside her looking at the t v damn i th...
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