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oad in the pistol and knew how to load it cock it and unlock the safety on the handle then it would make sense that it would be pretty easy for her to take the next step and end her life okay so what am i missing here danny asked uncle claims not only was the gun not loaded but he had taken it apart to clean it the day before and wasn t finished cleaning it when patricia had apparently put it back together selected the correct bullets to load into the chamber and then used it to blow her brains out rick said so you think this brad kid somehow drove carlos car into the river with him in it and then a few months after that broke into a gun cabinet in this patricia s uncle s house put the uncle s pistol back together and forced patricia to shoot herself with it danny asked whatever rick was trying to tell danny didn t make sense this brad maybe tried killing jenna at the facility when she was eight and eleven years later kills a couple members of this disbanded secret group of kids not convinced yet rick asked he pushed another photo of a child in front of danny s face stephanie haze age ten in the photo group member ten hung herself in her college dorm room in new york eighteen months ago rick said replacing the photo of the little girl with one of a young woman s body hanging by a thick rope over a twin bed littered with stuffed animals another photo was thrown at danny daren childs age twelve here group member nine mauled to death seventeen months ago by a black bear in the woods of south dakota rick slipped another photo in front of danny with a barely recognizable body ripped to shreds lying in a patch of grass next to some trees another photo katie benson age nine member eight slipped and fell down three flights of stairs at a hotel in florida and broke her neck thirteen months ago rick pushed more photos of the grown up katie benson into danny s hands her body rested at the foot of a flight of stairs left leg curled underneath her right arm splayed at an unnatural angle tangled in a thick mess of dirty blonde hair her vacant eyes stared directly at danny jack fox second oldest of the group at fifteen seventh member overdosed on vicodin twelve months ago rick said as he flipped two photos over to danny one of the fifteen year old fox the next of an adult male lying facedown on a dirty couch a trail of vomit led from the edge of the couch to a small pool formed on the floor do i really need to continue or are you getting this now rick asked in exasperation danny sat still on the couch surrounded by photos of young children interspersed with photos of their older dead selves a sinking feeling settled in the pit of his stomach as he stared at the pictures member six is steve lafonde age ten in this photo here rick said holding up the picture slit his own throat on a beach right here in washington a little over eight weeks ago rick held up the other photo of a young man lying next to a smooth log on the rocky beach blood pooled around his head danny s blood ran cold as rick threw the pictures at him he knew the kid in this photo it was the obituary he was reading on jenna s last morning home before returning to college posted by rick daley at 12 58 pm 2 comments labels sample pages query liquid smoke click here to read the sample pages dear fantastic agent when the eight year old daughter of danny reece was forcibly taken by agent rick delaruse danny had no choice but to submit to the government and pray for the collapse of the secret program she was enlisted in thirteen years later jenna is living the happy life of a college student and has no recollection of the six month long government program when she is attacked on campus agent delaruse pays a visit to danny with alarming news the twelve children who were enrolled in the program thirteen years earlier are turning up dead in the order they were inducted with his grown daughter next in line on the short list of a serial killer danny is forced to team up with his long standing enemy to revisit the past and uncover the true reason behind the government program she was forced to participate in when she was a child liquid smoke is a 70 000 word psychological thriller i would be happy to forward the complete manuscript upon request thank for your time and consideration cordially my name here posted by rick daley at 12 56 pm 3 comments labels psychological thriller oct 24 2010 query the odd i see second revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision dear agent please consider representing my novel the odd i see a 71 000 word work of slipstream fiction after a falling out with her favorite hallucination a half assed stay in the loony bin and entry into the real world by way of college graduation fifi wants to know why she ought to bother existing twenty two year old fifi works an underachiever s dream job while struggling to reconcile her surrealistic worldview with modern middle class american living her maybe imaginary vampire lover tries to convince her that she ll become part of a constellation if she kills herself on the other hand her real life boyfriend whom she met while having an adventure in the art of pretending to be a prostitute seems a solid case for divine intervention in a world fifi deems just shy of apocalypse unsure of her continued interest in the business of existence fifi uses blue and sometimes black humor to systematically reason her way through the meaning of life and into a decision about whether the act of living is worth the effort i am writing to you because i connected with your interview on guide to literary agents your submission guidelines and novel you represented an excerpt of this novel was published in the spring 2009 edition of the newport review literary magazine a separate excerpt was published in the 2006 edition of loyola university chicago s annual literary journal cadence i can be reached by phone at by email at bre jamstage net or by postal mail at 123 xyz st thank you for your time and consideration best regards bre kidman sidebar this is a small revision i guess but i m having trouble packing more info into such a small space eep also a question when an agent asks for a certain number of sample pages should one take the number of pages multiply by 250 and include that number of words is it safe to take that number of pages out of a word document and include those how does one calculate the length of a ten page excerpt thanks for reading posted by rick daley at 8 52 am 3 comments labels slipstream fiction oct 22 2010 query possessed third revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision dear agent nineteen year old gabriel is not supposed to remember who he is or what he has done however the white horizon research facility experiment fails everything that gabriel thought was real turns out to be a product of radiation electrodes and drugs including his identity as a young midshipman in the napoleonic war gabriel s memory returns along with the angry voices of those that he killed five years ago they want revenge he wishes he could erase what he did to them when gabriel and two other participants are locked in a debriefing room they overhear the doctors decision to euthenize them the study is illegal they are not supposed to be alive and one of the other volunteers gabriel s troubled cousin has already escaped they find a way out but gabriel s cousin will not rest until she kills all three of them wherever they go she finds them gabriel will have to find a way to keep himself and his new friends alive but nothing can save him from the guilt and remorse he feels everyone knows that there is no way out of eternal damnation for a killer possessed is a young adult supernatural thriller with a final word count of 56 000 words thank you for taking the time to review my work sincerely sara flower kjeldsen posted by rick daley at 6 20 am 6 comments labels supernatural thriller young adult oct 21 2010 query anti boys dear agent america van roy has had enough of boys after having her heart broken one last time she decides to go without guys for a year complete with a set of rules however after an accident involving a pe class and a flying football lands her in a very dizzy situation america is rescued by a knight in shining armor end of romantic story right wrong caleb bartlette the new kid in school who everyone can t get enough of tries every trick in the book to get america s attention but she s not caving even though she finds him charming handsome and impossible to avoid america won t show anyone what s going on inside her broken heart only when their new friendship is threatened by a stubborn parent who wants to pick up and move away will america be convinced to tell the truth in 63 000 words my young adult novel anti boys tells the story of a girl who has to learn to trust again after many cruel heart breaks some of the best young adult novels are written by people who are young adults themselves as a college sophomore i find it easy to capture their emotions and tell a realistic story although this is my second novel i am currently unpublished i hope young adult readers will fall in love with the characters of anti boys and find themselves able to relate to america s problems thank you for taking the time to read my letter and i hope i have captured your interest posted by rick daley at 7 28 am 5 comments labels young adult oct 20 2010 query my demonic love first revision click here to read the original query dear agent name betrayed by her angelic lover dendera is punished to live out her days as an immortal in a mortal s world she has no demonic powers left and the afterlife grows into a far memory as she searches for a way to become mortal realizing the only person who can help her is the man who cost her everything dendera finds she s not strong enough to keep her distance from her now mortal angel stalking ryan in the shadows of new york city for his own protection emotions dendera never experienced as a demon are running high at the idea of letting herself trust him again but ryan isn t her only problem an evil far more ancient and violent is out for revenge and the only thing it wants from dendera is the mortal man she s protecting my demonic love is a completed work of paranormal romance at 90 000 words enclosed i have included whatever they want thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 1 00 pm 1 comment labels paranormal romance query bitch working title dear super agent bitch its what the kids in high school call lilly parker dumping keegan williams earned her the title but now that he has fled his abusive stepfather and sought refuge at her house she hopes to shake the label but there s a kink in every plan and lilly s got a whole knot of them he mother turns traitor and offers keegan a permanent place to stay against lilly s protests keegan s renewed presence ignites old passions but why shouldn t it she didn t break up with him because of him she loved keegan it was his stepfather she couldn t handle so she moved on despite her new boyfriend s frequent disappearances for work she s falling in love with him explaining why her ex is staying with her isn t going to be fun and avoiding it isn t possible or so she thinks for lilly problems don t just evaporate when her boyfriend leaves town and keegan goes to live with his grandmother they condense down to one kidnapper waiting for her in her bedroom alone and scared and locked in a cage she will do anything to get her complicated life back even if it means losing both of the boys she loves and tattooing the word bitch on her forehead too bad for her things are never that easy bitch is a 60 000 word young adult paranormal romance novel and available upon request thank you for you consideration jodi this is very rough give me what you have to pick about i appreciate suggestions for fixes thanks in advance posted by rick daley at 9 46 am 4 comments labels paranormal romance young adult oct 19 2010 query the academy dear public query slushpile at thirteen years old lucy gibbons has her career set she will follow in the footsteps of her late ballerina mother and become the principal female dancer of the montgomery ballet in england with the school verging on bankruptcy what better money maker than a young ballerina taking over where her famous dead mother left off or at least that s what her instructors at montgomery s have in mind all lucy wants to do is enjoy her first year in england make friends explore london perfect her arabesque and find one straight boy in a sea of gays when she snags all the good roles however and meets all the right people her fellow first years turn their noses up at her turns out it s pretty lonely at the top she pulls some strings amongst her newfound connections and gains her best friend alex a supporting role bad move alex isn t what they re looking for and if lucy doesn t fire her montgomery s might garnish a bad review and lose its sponsors the academy is a young adult novel of 50 000 words that follows lucy s journey from tutus and pointe shoes to every prima ballerina s ultimate dilemma fame or friendship will lucy please her instructors and follow her dreams or does limelight really wreck a girl s complexion i am a dance teacher and bookseller with a bachelor s degree in english literature this is my first novel thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 3 00 pm 2 comments labels young adult query possessed second revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision dear agent fourteen year old gabriel s parents are dead he barely escapes from his family s burning estate and flees to a nearby forest gabriel defeats an armed pursuer only to be chased by another who turns out to be a man that is not harmed by any of gabriel s bullets then gabriel awakens in a bright room it is filled with people wearing long white coats they tell him that he volunteered at the white horizon research facility for a classified psychological study two weeks ago the program is a failure gabriel s hazy memory returns along with the angry voices that have plagued him for five years he knows what they want but he has no idea how to make up for the unforgiveable thing he has done the paranoid medical staff debates on whether or not to euthanize the study s volunteers gabriel and two other participants run away from the facility to make matters worse an armed maniac one of the study s ex volunteers will not rest until she kills all three of them wherever they go she finds them gabriel will have to find a way to keep himself and his new friends alive possessed is a young adult supernatural thriller that contains a final word count of 56 000 words thank you for taking the time to review my work sincerely sara flower kjeldsen posted by rick daley 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