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ouldn t posted by rick daley at 4 00 pm 3 comments labels sample pages mar 24 2010 query launch on need dear agent for more than two decades nasa launch imaging expert ken brown complained to upper management that debris would eventually bring down a shuttle they didn t listen brown could only watch as wayward pieces of foam and falling daggers of ice threatened to wreck his birds then on january 17th 2003 brown s worst fear is realized while reviewing the previous day s launch film a small suitcase sized debris chunk smashed into columbia s wing during her ride to orbit brown knows that if columbia s heat shield has been damaged that in fourteen days the seven person international crew will perish in the inferno of reentry although brown contacts the necessary nasa officials about his findings he is skeptical that sufficient action will be taken by management in time to save the crew he decides to leak his findings to his friend john stangley a former cnn senior science correspondent nasa suddenly finds itself forced to respond to the international media s demand for answers satellite imaging of columbia is ordered but the photos prove inconclusive nasa then calls on two columbia astronauts to perform an emergency wing inspection spacewalk that reveals catastrophic wing damage nasa is challenged to solve the highest profile problem they ve ever faced the whole world watches and waits while nasa figures out how and if it can safely bring the crew home the columbia accident investigation board was formed only hours after columbia s break up february 1st 2003 nasa engineers were asked by the board if anything could have been done to save the crew the board s final report published late 2003 contained a 22 page document created by nasa engineers that outlined in detail how the crew might have been rescued launch on need complete at 98 000 words is a fictionalization of nasa s rescue plan thank you for your time considering my project for representation sincerely daniel guiteras address phone posted by rick daley at 10 32 am 7 comments labels guess the genre query facets of sorrow dear agent s name thank you for allowing me to introduce my novel to you facets of sorrow is a work of women s fiction which is complete at 95 000 words gemma allen knows sorrow she knows him well he overwhelmed her with his confidence seduced her with his charm and injured her with his strength his name is aaron dullis and if she would just stop needing him maybe he could stop loving her she refuses to give him that satisfaction when gemma meets kyle johnson she thinks he s the one person who can bring her joy and he does the problem with loving two men however is that she s not sure how to balance her need for each of them with her desire for them both it seems an impossible choice maybe it is but she knows she must choose gemma and kyle marry but after a few years of marriage his secretive behavior and mysterious business trips have gemma convinced he s not who she thought he was she s right he has a past of his own full of his own sorrow and regret when gemma is forced to protect kyle s secret she makes decisions that land her in a hospital bed aaron in handcuffs and kyle in a legal and ethical dilemma as he tries to clean up the mess they ve all made i have a b a in english from the university of texas my previous writing experience includes serving as a ghostwriter for life builders a nationwide mentoring ministry thank you so much for your time and for considering my novel sincerely genevieve wilson posted by rick daley at 7 27 am 7 comments labels women s fiction mar 22 2010 middle grade joshua and the fantastic forest revision 3 click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision twelve year old joshua cooper finds out a walk in the woods can change his life or end it bored as the new kid in town he is desperate for adventure he finds it in the forest when he befriends talking animals transformed accidentally from dna of the same highly evolved animals that lived millions of years ago and died out he shares his magical world with two unlikely friends he rescues and they vow to protect the secret of their forest friends when a power hungry fox secretly transforms thousands of animals with his prehistoric dna into his allies to rule the forest joshua must find a way to save his captured friends and stop the fox he rallies his comrades to raise their own army and build an arsenal of weapons to defend themselves against the evil hoard in the battle of their lives i am seeking your representation for my manuscript joshua and the fantastic forest a 52 000 word middle grade adventure that appeals to boys i am a freelance writer with a background in reporting and marketing thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 2 24 pm 2 comments labels adventure middle grade mar 20 2010 query the watchers daughter dear agent eighteen year old morgan meadows has promised her arabian mare epona they will never be parted yet she doesn t realize that while she works to build a life on a kentucky horse farm guardians lurk in the shadows carefully observing her until the secrets of her family can be revealed keeping her promise to epona morgan takes her along when she gets a chance to meet the parents she s never known morgan learns her father comes from a family of fallen angels known as watchers immortal beings searching for redemption as they strive to protect all creatures including the creatures of a parallel world known as gaia morgan s parents left her behind as an infant because she showed no evidence of their powers reasoning it best she live a normal human life only after begging the council ancient rulers of the watchers are they able to arrange this reunion however to protect their secrets on earth the council decrees morgan be taken to gaia in gaia morgan finds herself a target of creatures who have been feeding the fire of their hatred for humanity for centuries their hatred stems from the abuse and neglect humans have inflicted on their world and the creatures in it because if earth dies gaia does as well morgan tries to convince them of the good in humanity using her love for epona as an example but many believe it is a trick morgan has her own magic a magic she shares with epona her powers grow with each new obstacle she faces as visions present her first assignment as a watcher to find and protect the white buffalo calf from sioux legend she hopes her magic will also help her make peace with the gaians but when a gaian kills her best friend morgan plans to use her new powers for vengeance instead the watchers daughter is an 82 000word young adult fantasy complete and ready for review upon your request i have a b a in english and taught college level english courses for several years i have been co editor of a statewide periodical and was recently published in modern arabian horse magazine thank you for your time sincerely angela greenlief posted by rick daley at 12 31 pm 9 comments labels fantasy young adult mar 19 2010 query joshua and the fantastic forest revision 2 click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision joshua and the fantastic forest revision 2 thanks to all the commenters for improving this sorry i put this in wrong spot before on to helping someone else dear public query slushpile twelve year old joshua cooper is about to find out how a walk in the woods can change his life or end it as the new kid in town he is desperate for adventure he finds it in the mountain forest above his home when he befriends talking animals created from the dna of super powered creatures that roamed the earth long ago he shares his magical world with two unlikely friends he rescues a bully and an old man and they vow to protect the secret of their forest friends when a power hungry fox secretly recreates thousands of his own animals to conquer and rule the forest joshua must find a way to save his friends and himself he leads his comrades to raise their own army and craft an arsenal of weapons to defend themselves against the evil hoard in the battle of their lives i am seeking your representation for my manuscript joshua and the fantastic forest a 52 000 word middle grade adventure that appeals to boys i am a freelance writer with a background in reporting and marketing thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 8 06 am 2 comments labels adventure middle grade mar 16 2010 query joshua and the fantastic forest revision 1 click here to read the original query revision to joshua and the fantastic forest thank you dear public query slushpile twelve year old joshua cooper is about to find out how a walk in the woods can magically change his life or end it as the new kid in town he is desperate for adventure he soon finds it in the mountain forest above his home but not with kids or even humans when he befriends talking animals they share the story of their accidental transformation into animals of amazing strength and reason that roamed the earth millions of years ago whose existence was blasted away by a meteorite siege that left no trace behind well almost none when a bumbling old mr bimble s walking stick carved from wood he dug up as a boy that held the dna of these ancient animals giving him their powers is struck by lightning in the forest and explodes into shimmering dust it changes every creature it touches into the animals of long ago bound with their new powers these animals also carry the memories of their ancestors and know not all were decent and wise they know some carried dark urges to plunder and conquer their own could there be others like that now all of this is forgotten in the idyllic days that follow as joshua spends them soaring over the forest on a magnificent bald eagle playing tag in the meadow with deer racing through the woods hanging onto the scruff of a mighty bear and sharing fireside tales with his best friend a beaver joshua soon realizes he can t keep the secret of the animals to himself when he encounters mr bimble looking for his lost walking stick and matt a school bully heading up the mountain to shoot off fireworks in the woods he must decide to rescue them from a forest sinkhole with the help of his generous new friends and risk sharing their secret the unlikely trio becomes friends and vows to protect the secret of the animals no matter what the consequence joshua discovers mr bimble is dying from cancer and encourages his friends to create a special magic dna brew in the hopes to cure him they have no idea one of their own is creating his own dna concoction only not to cure to create and conquer when a power hungry fox carrying the dark seed of his ancestors secretly recreates thousands of his own fantastic animals into an army of soldiers to rule the forest and possibly the world joshua must find a way to save his forest friends he leads his comrades to raise their own army and build an arsenal of weapons to defend themselves against the evil animal hoard in the battle of their lives i am seeking your representation for my manuscript joshua and the fantastic forest a 52 000 word contemporary middle grade adventure fantasy that appeals to boys i am a freelance writer with a background in reporting and marketing thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 3 22 pm 6 comments labels adventure fantasy middle grade the nameless query revision 2 click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision it s labeled revision 2 but it s really version 2 revision 1 oops okay i thought my query still needed some tweaking i dropped the question at the end please let me know if this reads better dear agent eighteen year old erica ann dawson falls asleep in her bed in batesfield connecticut and awakens to find herself driving down a four lane highway plagued by inexplicable blackouts she begins losing hours even days with no memory of what transpired in the intervening time as the blackouts worsen she starts to doubt her own sanity but the truth is even crazier erica is slowly being replaced from her own life by a creature known only as a changeling this doppelganger has bewitched erica s name and is using it to steal away her memories her life her very soul to save herself from being completely consumed erica is forced to make a terrible sacrifice she gives up her name and with it relinquishes all rights to her own identity now nameless and forgotten by friends and family alike the girl is plunged into a world of magic where a sharpie and a book of matches could mean the difference between life and death she must learn to harness the power of names and sigils to fight back against the changelings and the dark force invading batesfield but if erica stands a chance at reclaiming her former life she will need to discover the truth behind what the changelings truly are if she fails she will remain nameless forever the nameless is a ya fantasy novel complete at 60 000 words the manuscript is available upon request thank you for your time and consideration sincerely emily xxxx address phone email posted by rick daley at 3 20 pm 3 comments labels fantasy young adult mar 15 2010 query finding tessa dear ms agent name i am seeking representation for my romance novel finding tessa 72 400 word 230 page a steaming and passionate love story between a romanian do not step on my toes feisty woman and an italian don t take no for an answer attractive man when people fall in love there are circumstances that either bring them together or drive them apart so is the story of my main characters tessa and alex he is a handsome italian powerful and successful and a loving husband he is living the good life until one night his wife is killed in a car accident and his whole world falls apart nothing and nobody can help him snap out of it or fill the emptiness in his heart his life passes by without him being able to feel anything until he meets tessa she is a young romanian beautiful smart and a very independent full of energy and ready for whatever life throws at her her accidental encounter with alex impacts their life forever without either one of them knowing following a one night stand the two of them part and each returns to their normal life years later the two characters get another chance to meet but their union is tested again after things seem to have taken a normal course an attack by her ex boy friend leaves tessa in a coma until one day she wakes up but has no recollection of who she was nor any of the people around her from a normal and happy existence tessa s life turned upside down her inability to remember anything from her past her frustrations and struggle to find herself again takes a toll on her relationship with alex for a period of time she opts to battle by herself the internal turmoil and demons that feasted at her soul and heart eventually time...
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