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daily life for seventeen year old haythem he dreams of adventure but never expects to leave turig until the day his mother appears a mother he grew up believing dead she pleads with him to leave at once telling him he needs to find the courage to embrace his destiny and to assume his rightful place among her people the elves haythem is curious to learn more and so he leaves taking with him an old map and a stone she cautions him to protect with the help of arygos a mysterious young man and tarquin an ancient creature of great wisdom haythem uncovers the truth about the stone and how the king s desire to possess it is connected to unrest in the empire he also learns the stone gives him the power to wield magic this newfound knowledge forces haythem to come face to face with the true legacy of the stone he is disturbed by what he discovers the stone is an extension of his own magic and if he is to have mastery over it he must bind himself to its will in order to rid the empire of the cruel king and fulfill his destiny the destiny stone is a fast paced young adult fantasy and is complete at 115 000 words it explores the joy of love the pain of loss and the power of courage and sacrifice i have a m a in anthropology and have experience teaching university level sociology and anthropology courses thank you for your time and consideration aspiring writer don t miss a beat get messenger on your phone posted by rick daley at 8 02 am 4 comments labels fantasy young adult mar 29 2010 query mourn their courage click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision liu jie fears losing family members more than anything so he raises an army when his nephew the ron emperor requires protection from yellow turban rebels with the help of aiyu an orphaned boy jie saved the rebels are destroyed however jie does not believe they were the emperor s true threat he suspects the imperial chancellor intends to usurp the throne rather than waging war and risking the lives of thousands jie attacks the chancellor during a chance meeting the attack fails and jie his family and aiyu flee continuing their struggle to survive amidst drought and warfare bitter loss continues to overshadow jie until he must choose between the safety of his family or his empire s survival mourn their courage is a 94 000 word fantasy based on chinese folktales collectively called the romance of the three kingdoms though adapted for film comics and video game serialization there are no modern english novelizations of this treasure mourn their courage may interest fans of eric flint cindy pon and guy gavriel kay and is similar in setting to kay s under heaven due april 27th i have published fiction in several online publications and am a member of the wuxia society and the china history forum online where i contribute book reviews i am also an active book reviewer on two blogs saving an orphan launches jie on an epic journey where ghosts are guides and heroes are traitors i invite you to experience mourn their courage thank you so much for this opportunity i look forward to your suggestions posted by rick daley at 10 36 pm 8 comments labels fantasy mar 26 2010 query snare college freshman chloe shepherd s knows that guys like dylan hughes don t fall for girls like her so when he seems equally smitten chloe is ecstatic and totally unprepared for the girl in the corridor she grills chloe about her date with dylan finishing with a terse don t like him too much the last girl who did ended up dead the words ring in chloe s head are they a warning or a sinister promise she can t ask dylan he doesn t speak to her now he won t even look at her as they sit next to each other in class yet months later dylan confesses that he s missed her and chloe dives headlong into his words despite his admission that the dead girlfriend is the least of it she s been waiting for this and if that explosive first kiss is anything to go by so has he but dylan warns her he s still not a good bet that hasn t changed he and his family are part of the great rayhm clan of witches the symbol of the clan burned into his skin is testament to how very powerful he is yet to chloe they are just two ordinary people falling extraordinarily in love who knows how long it might have stayed that way if she hadn t eavesdropped on him in the library now she realizes what he s been keeping from her for every secret he s revealed there s a deeper one because of her dylan will be forced to defend his birthright chloe is the only person in the world who can give him the one thing he s never wanted the power to rule the rayhm snare is a ya new adult paranormal romance complete at 94 000 words personal info below thank you for your consideration brenda st john brown posted by rick daley at 11 00 pm 5 comments labels paranormal romance young adult query iron thirst urban fantasy click here to read the last query trying something new here want to see if less is more or just more confusing dear most awesome agent ever the why i picked you paragraph looking for an escape from the norm felicity johnson dresses for trouble and finds it when she attends dragoncon the convention that celebrates everything sci fi and fantasy felicity meets a love interest discovers the dead body of a friend and stumbles over a real vampire who develops a thirst for the iron running through her veins the trip that started as a search for adventure leads her down a path that could leave her either dead or with the ultimate makeover one that can t be undone without a stake to the heart iron thirst is an 88 000 word urban fantasy i am a member of the atlanta writers club and sisters in crime sincerely would be nicest client ever posted by rick daley at 7 02 pm 9 comments labels urban fantasy sample pages diary of a hot pink party girl i should have known drew strunkler skunkler would morph into a big giant douche bag the second school started like i was just some fly he could flick right off his shoulder i mean seriously the guy wasn t even capable of intelligent thought as if to prove my point he was trying to kick a football over the roof of the school building with his other brainless jock friends i tugged at the collar of my shirt feeling the heat creep all the way up to my face ugh did my eyes actually light up when i saw him it didn t matter because drew strunkler was too busy winning a bet i wonder which pinhead will have to moon poor mrs elkin the librarian the book lady s gonna get another piece of ass today huh alex stoner slid into the bench beside me and i turned to him and laughed you would think she d wear a blindfold by now with all the butt cracks she s had flashed in front of her we watched drew back up his face tight with concentration the broad and brawny william peckman aka pecker with his tiny head and giant body held the football upright in the grass by his fingertips a guy that huge had to be covering some other insecurity like a small penis with a graceful swing of his leg drew s foot made perfect contact with the ball and it sailed over the roof damn pecker muttered drew punched him in the arm laughing like the stupid ass idiot he was somebody s dropping his pants today and just like that his eyes turned in my direction and paused tawny alex whispered did strunkler just look at you i shrugged but my heart was pounding yeah for about a quarter of a second alex flipped back the mop of dark curly hair falling in his eyes looked like he was checking you out like i care let s go inside its five minutes till homeroom i was nearly twenty feet away before i realized alex wasn t following he stood in the middle of the grass gaping at me like an imbecile what he shook his head and grinned sorry i m still not used to the good tawny the one who actually cares about being on time i ve been here all summer caring about school has become an annoying habit i reached for the door but another hand beat me to it both alex and i jumped back as drew strunkler flung the door open his gaze went straight over my head and then he turned quickly and raced into the school building before us so rude alex said i sucked in a breath wishing i was less observant the way his eyes conveniently traveled over my head when we should have been face to face it was intentional he planned to ignore me on the first day of school i groaned it sucks to care alex and i headed to my locker when mr feldman the vice principal jumped in front of us blocking my way miss childers i see an entire summer hasn t knocked some sense into you i have no idea what you re talking about i responded alex snorted back laughter and i jabbed my elbow into his side mr feldman shoved his glasses further up his nose and returned to crossing his arms i m referring to your blatant disregard for school dress code he picked up a lock of my blonde hair the chunk with the pink streak and tugged on it i jerked away from his touch actually i decided to make it permanent over the summer detention today after school he growled i d die before i missed spending an afternoon with you we ran around him and blended in with the mob of students all dressed in navy and khaki flooding the halls by the time i collapsed into my seat for study hall it was apparent that junior year was going to be a much bigger pill to swallow than last year and to top it off drew strunkler and pecker sat right behind me damn i pulled out a magazine and lifted my black boots onto the table relieved to have forty minutes of peace before yet another mind numbing class hey strunk listen to this pecker said to drew from behind me i glanced under my arm and saw his cell phone lay on his lap hey everyone and happy first day of school pecker read aloud hot pink party girl has had one busy summer do you realize how many guys are willing to get to second base while completely loaded yeah pretty much all of them okay so one turned me down and i had to listen to him yap and quote biblical scripture for twenty tortuous minutes if that doesn t put out your fire i don t know what does my summer total was over fifty guys and let me tell you i ve seen more little firemen some smaller than others in three months than i thought possible quiet mr peckman this is study hall the teacher shouted from the front of the large lecture hall dude this chick sounds so hot i d love to nail her pecker whispered to drew they both chuckled and i turned a little lowering my copy of national geographic just enough to lift one eyebrow in drew s direction a silent warning his smile faded and he dropped his gaze to the algebra book in front of him i stifled a laugh that s right be afraid be very afraid cause i know all your secrets drew strunkler all your virgin secrets you do realize i won t budge on school dress code mr feldman said to me as i walked into detention she knows alex said i grinned at him how did you end up in here what are friends for couldn t leave you all by yourself in other words he wasn t going to tell me in front of mr feldman we moved to the back of the room and scooted our desks closer together okay so i was in the locker room changing after gym class alex made a face hand eye coordination was not something he d been blessed with so gym was torture for a kid like him anyway strunkler and what s that dude s name the one that hikes the ball to the thrower guy i laughed alex had only been at west montgomery high for a year and didn t know everyone s name like i did nor did he have any knowledge of football you re talking about the center and his name is patrick johnson right strunkler and johnson were tossing towels over the lockers and they still hadn t changed yet out of their gym clothes johnson was being an ass shoving all the freshman midgets out of his way and so i just snatched his clothes off the bench when he wasn t looking and tossed them in an open locker you didn t he nodded proudly it was an unassigned locker and since we ve got those built in locks he had to go out of the changing room in a towel to coach strunkler s office to have him look up the combination i busted out laughing and mr feldman glared in our direction alex you are far braver than i ever gave you credit for he beamed it was a shining moment yeah just like winning an olympic medal i lowered my voice so you have coach strunkler for p e yeah why so drew s in his dad s class hey if it isn t the legend tawny childers i spun in my chair to face the wild haired boy lenny i thought you were dropping out my parents say they ll keep making my car payments if i pass most of my classes cool i said you missed an awesome party last night lenny said why don t you fill me in i said his face broke into vacant i m drunk off my ass stupid grin that hadn t changed in two years mostly because lenny hadn t changed well my brother pulled through and got us a keg razor s band played and they were so on fire this chick they ve got singing for them is like mega hot i listened intently for at least ten minutes absorbing every detail of that party the old tawny s life the one i still struggled to shed it was a damn good party alex said a lot of people asked about you lenny leaned his head closer to me and alex i ve got a massive bottle of jack daniels in the back of my car you guys want to drive out to the lake after this school shit is over alex looked at me and shrugged but i shook my head i ve got a meeting bummer sucks to be you all academic and committed how do you survive lenny asked i rolled my eyes people survive one school day without getting loaded i m not a freakin saint or anything lenny put a hand over his heart you re my hero tawny feldman was glaring again so lenny turned back to the open text book on his desk he raised it up a little and slipped a copy of hustler inside so predictable alex nudged me in the shoulder you re still doing that group thing he whispered yes all summer while i was gone yes i blew the hair off my face trying to give off the leave me alone vibe don t they have bring a friend day or something why would they have that and why are you so curious all of a sudden he shrugged i don t know it s like this big part of your life and you could be at a strip club for all i know why would i be at a strip club quit answering my questions with a question at least tell me where it is this was a joke to him it was last year and it still is you know i can t do that what if i needed to join is anybody i know in your group i turned my eyes away from him and pulled out one of the many thick textbooks taking up space in my bag you don t need to go and there s no one you know whatever he said he was pissed but even if i wanted to tell him i couldn t posted by rick daley at 4 00 pm 3 comments labels sample pages mar 24 2010 query launch on need dear agent for more than two decades nasa launch imaging expert ken brown complained to upper management that debris would eventually bring down a shuttle 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