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ating body exchanges while making love brett falls more deeply for ariel and comes to suspect his people have really misunderstood this technology yet he also fears passion has prejudiced him and he may postpone action against a danger to humanity until too late absorption is an eighty thousand word science fiction manuscript posted by rick daley at 1 40 pm 7 comments labels science fiction apr 26 2011 query the man in the cinder clouds click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision the temperature is the only cool thing about jason s trip to the north pole with his father but things heat up when they discover a book buried deep in the ice this is no ordinary book mind you for starters it was written by an elf and if that s not enough the book proves the existence of kris kringle you know santa claus born human but abandoned as a baby kris is rescued by elfs and grows up among them but he doesn t really fit in kris embarks on a quest to find his true family among the humans by delivering presents on christmas day there s a catch though the high council of elfs is convinced humans are wicked at heart and kris can t return to his elfin home unless he can prove otherwise his journey takes him all the way to the legendary great northern glen and from there to the town of oldenton where he finds two orphans who are about to lose everything they have to a greedy uncle with only days before christmas kris must try to help the kids deliver his presents find his family and prove that human virtue does exist even in the most unexpected of human hearts the man in the cinder clouds is a 35 000 word novella written for anyone who has ever believed in santa claus this story within a story explains everything from the origins of santa s white hair and red suit to his ability to fit all those presents in one sack it also has a streak of action and adventure think santa begins it should appeal to the reluctant boy reader posted by rick daley at 9 30 pm 10 comments labels christmas novella query abbey 1st revision note new title click here to read the original query on the first day of camp abbey realizes a horrible mistake has been made she s stranded at the wrong camp by the second day of camp abbey is faced with the consequence of being a lifetime spook magnet the river falls camp which has its own spooky history turns abbey s spook ometer up to 11 the third day of camp begins with cold spots and moving furniture quickly escalating to a paranormal freakshow with a field of dead frogs a ghostly stalker and mysterious symbols carved into the wall the first week of camp ends with abbey trying to figure out the meaning behind the symbols as they intrude into her life with more and more urgency abbey s ghostly experiences were a curse growing up costing her dearly and leaving her scarred and friendless at 14 years the final week of camp features a scavenger hunt which turns deadly as lightning strikes leaving abbey trapped with a boy she likes a mean girl she doesn t and her drama queen roommate abbey is forced to use her curse to save their lives as she reaches into another world for help the trouble is this help threatens to consume her which could cost abbey her new friends as well as her very humanity spooky girl is a 56 000 word young adult novel with a paranormal theme i have written professionally in advertising and marketing for over a decade thank you for your time allan evans address redacted phone number redacted allan docevans com www evanswriter com abbey posted by rick daley at 2 24 pm 5 comments labels paranormal young adult apr 24 2011 query abbey the startling spooky truly epic paranormal tale of a haunted teen abbey the startling spooky truly epic paranormal tale of a haunted teen is a 56 000 word young adult novel written with equal amounts of suspense and humor the book tells the story of an unusual 15 year old strange things have always happened around abbey on her first birthday abbey s recently deceased grandmother is photographed looming over her in the background but strand her at a haunted summer camp having to battle both the counselors and the undead and anything can happen abbey was hoping for a calm summer before starting high school but her father s sudden extended business trip ruins that his plan to have abbey attend church camp in rural river falls goes from bad to worse when she discovers the camp ended a week ago leaving her stranded at camp toughlove a boot camp for troubled teens river falls has always had a spooky history but the arrival of abbey has turned the spook ometer up to 11 first it s cold spots and moving furniture then it becomes a paranormal freakshow with a field of dead frogs blood red marks on the wall and the bodiless head of woman long dead now something is reaching out to abbey with a mysterious symbol that shows up with more and more urgency thrown together with a boy she likes a mean girl she doesn t and a roommate with the mother of all split personalities abbey has to figure out the meaning of these otherworldly clues as her entire world crumbles down around her i have written professionally in advertising and marketing for over a decade this is my third novel sincerely allan evans posted by rick daley at 2 41 pm 4 comments labels young adult apr 18 2011 query the odd i see third revision click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision grabbed a fistful of form rejections on the last version let s try this again dear dream agent after a falling out with her favorite hallucination a half assed stay in the loony bin and a rather rude entrance into the real world by way of college graduation fiona wants to know why she ought to bother existing the odd i see is a coming of age story for the sort of person who staunchly refuses to come of age one part heartfelt love letter one part memory laced suicide note and one part metafictional choose your own adventure style romp the odd i see is a 71 000 word work of quirky literary fiction with a speculative twist twenty two year old fiona or fifi to everyone but her mother works an underachiever s dream job while struggling to reconcile her questionably sane worldview with recession era middle class american living her maybe imaginary vampire lover tries to convince her that she ll become part of a constellation if she kills herself on the other hand her real life boyfriend whom she met while having an adventure in the art of pretending to be a prostitute seems a solid case for divine intervention in a world fifi deems just shy of apocalypse unsure of her continued interest in the business of existence she uses blue and sometimes black humor to systematically reason her way through the meaning of life and into a decision about whether the act of living is worth the effort written for and by someone who graduated with a liberal arts degree in the late 2000 s the odd i see will appeal to any reader who has ever questioned the status quo brief paragraph of personalization thank you for your time and consideration best bre kidman posted by rick daley at 3 00 pm 8 comments labels literary fiction quirky query the desmona child dear agent i am looking for an agent that likes fantasy mythology with a twist my debut novel the desmona child is a 106 000 word work of ya fantasy that leads up to the fall of atlantis the ladies room is hardly where marine desmona expected a proposal she had danced giggled and enjoyed the night right up until a mysterious duke cornered her and vowed everlasting love in the tumultuous weeks following that event marine is conflicted but never more so than when she learns that she is the key to bringing magic back to the kingdom of adara and that having witch blood makes her appealing to the duke because he wants to create a progeny of untold magical power such a child could have god like dominion over life and death a long journey to escape the duke leads marine to the literal doorstep of a fabled haven the legendary atlantis where she hopes to disappear i am querying widely but will grant exclusivity if you are interested in seeing more of my work thank you for your time posted by rick daley at 7 27 am 2 comments labels fantasy young adult newer posts older posts home subscribe to posts atom submit queries here submit queries here query and writing resources agentquery com genre descriptions agentquery com how to write a query colleen lindsay word counts and novel length critiquing critiques editorial anonymous tips on your bio janet reid effective query class janet reid how to make sure your query is instantly rejected janet reid what to do when an agent says no jessica faust slushpile agent interview jessica faust publishing dictionary nathan bransford ten commandments for the happy writer nathan bransford the anatomy of a good query letter i nathan bransford the anatomy of a good query letter ii nathan bransford the basic 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