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your laundry basket again hasn t he i laughed and pushed his hand away i wasn t ignoring you i didn t know you were here plus i m an eighth grader i ll probably get hung or lynched just for this little chat i turned around then because mrs halloway walked in to the room and i realized immediately several pairs of eyes were on me spotlight number one i wished more than anything this was the only one it wasn t my cheeks burned and i slid down in my seat hoping mrs halloway would jump right in to complex equations she did jump into the lesson but not the long boring lecture i hoped for no that would be lucky which i wasn t and that would be reserved for traditional teachers which mrs halloway wasn t today we were doing a hands on project calculating angles of large objects outside using algebraic and geometric formulas so when she started to partner us up i glanced hopefully at dara even freddie would do eighth graders needed to stick together but instead i get april jenson mrs halloway said april stood and flipped her blonde hair over her shoulder mrs halloway looked down at her clip board april your partner will be eleanor cummings my face turned even redder and i ducked down pretending to pick up something from the floor eleanor cummings mrs halloway spoke with such authority i jerked up quickly banging my head on the desk hard i stood feeling the burn of everyone s eyes spotlight number two mrs halloway was new and didn t know name s yet she was just reading off the roster and the damage she caused was completely unintentional i heard justin laugh a little under his breath and mutter eleanor i had been ellie cummings since preschool like every other day i walked in as ellie but today i left as eleanor and today of all days eleanor was the absolute worst name to have posted by rick daley at 4 34 pm 2 comments labels sample pages query the eleanor story first revision click here to read the original query click here to read the sample pages on her fourteenth birthday ellie cummings has one amazing seventy two second kiss with the cutest boy in school three days later she s officially the slut of st vincent s academy shy quiet ellie is in for a surprise when justin the boy she s kept a secret from her friends all summer transfers to her school from the moment ellie chooses a seat in the cafeteria next to justin she goes from flying under the radar to being the center of gossip so juicy even the nuns are taking notice her friendship with justin is put under the microscope by everyone including ellie as she employs every method possible to protect her reputation even forming her very own list of thirty items guaranteed to keep rumors from spreading eye gazing hand holding daydreaming or vacant stare that might be mistaken for daydreaming are all out of the question despite her efforts to prove justin is a friend and nothing more ellie s true feelings creep in and she impulsively kisses him in front of twenty six pairs of eyes and one hairy mole working for the evil hailmary22 three days later hailmary22 has started a blog in her honor guess eleanor cummings next man rumors and lies fill the pages of the blog and ellie can t escape from an outcome she never asked for isolation from her friends and the boy she may love lead to something far worse than any rumor spread it s up to ellie to decide hide from hailmary22 or stand up for herself for the first in her life the eleanor story is a 54 000 word young adult novel this is my first project posted by rick daley at 10 07 am 8 comments labels young adult feb 1 2010 the butterfly key revision 2 revised click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision dear agent when nicole kuefler s seemingly indelible faith crumbles after her miscarriage she falls into an agonizing conflict against god concerned for his wife nicole s husband drew gathers his family around the christmas tree to weave a story about god and his so called providence this is the allegory of the butterfly key christian bryson s mother died after childbirth his father recently lost his battle with cancer therefore when abigail his wife discovers she is pregnant she is ecstatic to deliver him some good news sadly before abigail can tell him christian crushes her world by informing her that he is deploying for war consequently abigail reluctantly decides to keep her pregnancy a secret so christian can focus on keeping himself alive when wounded in battle christian learns he can no longer father children thus his promise of making abigail a mother haunts his soul struggling to accept his calamity christian cannot bring himself to tell abigail about his injury even as she pleads for him to come home believing christian should return for love and not for a sense of obligation abigail wrongly decides not to tell him about the birth of their progeny with their marriage on the verge of collapsing god intervenes and sends two special travelers to bring christian back home to his family after drew finishes his story he is unsure if nicole can forgive god that is until a unique present appears under the christmas tree from an invented character in his story a gift with the power to restore what nicole had lost her faith the butterfly key is a 72 000 word work of literary fiction a completed manuscript is available upon your request i look forward to working with you posted by rick daley at 9 30 am 8 comments labels literary fiction the butterfly key revision 2 click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision first off i would like to thank everyone for their comments i m trying hard to condense this down into its essence hopefully i can get some more of your wonderful feedback so with no further ado dear agent when nicole kuefler s seemingly indelible faith crumbles after her miscarriage she falls into an agonizing conflict against god concerned for his wife nicole s husband drew gathers his family around the christmas tree to weave a story about god and his so called providence this is the allegory of the butterfly key christian bryson s mother died shortly after childbirth his father recently lost his battle with cancer therefore when abigail his wife discovers she is pregnant she decides not to tell him because he is deploying for war when wounded in battle christian learns he can no longer father children thus a promise he made to make abigail a mother haunts his soul as christian struggles to accept a pledge he believes he cannot fulfill abigail fights for a husband who does not want to come home believing he should return for their love and not for a sense of obligation abigail decides not to tell christian about her recent birth with their marriage on the verge of collapsing god intervenes and sends two special travelers to bring christian home to his wife and unknown progeny after drew finishes his story he is unsure if nicole can forgive god that is until a unique present appears under the christmas tree from an invented character in his story a gift with the power to restore what nicole had lost her faith the butterfly key is a 72 000 word work of literary fiction set within the small town of columbus minnesota a completed manuscript is available upon your request i look forward to working with you regards a d n posted by rick daley at 6 00 am 3 comments labels literary fiction newer posts older posts home subscribe to posts atom submit queries here submit queries here query and writing resources agentquery com genre descriptions agentquery com how to write a query colleen lindsay word counts and novel length critiquing critiques editorial anonymous tips on your bio janet reid effective query class janet reid how to make sure your query is instantly rejected janet reid what to do when an agent says no jessica faust slushpile agent interview jessica faust publishing dictionary nathan bransford ten commandments for the happy writer nathan bransford the anatomy of a good 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