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y isn t much but i am outside your writing box and that always helps i hope more people check this out maybe i ll even send you my query i would love to have it picked apart march 6 2009 at 6 18 pm cassidy said rick i love the idea thanks for creating this blog i was hoping i could find a place where i could get feedback on a query look forward to polishing mine up and submitting it here cass march 6 2009 at 11 06 pm anonymous said hi rick i think i have read this query before on another blog or am i imagining it i just wanted to quickly check in i have an essay to write today but hopefully i ll be able to sit down and read in full tomorrow word veri tessesto sounds like some fun and spicy sauce march 7 2009 at 12 28 am elana johnson said rick do i post my query here march 8 2009 at 5 38 pm christine said rick this is an awesome idea thank you so much march 13 2009 at 5 38 pm anonymous said this is a great idea thanks i ll be putting mine up soon just need to do a read through since i haven t done anything with it lately march 13 2009 at 11 40 pm jan said rick i posted my query for lazt cats i hope i did it correctly and in the right spot jan march 14 2009 at 10 09 pm purpleclover said i missed nathan s post but saw your comment this is a great idea march 20 2009 at 4 13 pm rick daley said purpleclover thanks for stopping by nathan mentioned the blog in last friday s twip it s been going great so far i m glad to have you as part of the community march 20 2009 at 4 29 pm jordan mccollum said just a suggestion you might be able to make this slightly easier on yourself if you set up the blog email like this in blogger go to your blog settings then email under email posting address set the secretwords to whatever you want query and set it to save emails as draft posts if you want to control the post frequency content if not you can also set it to publish them immediately then you can instruct people to email the queries direct to whateverbloggersayshere query blogger com with the post title in the subject line and they re all set up for you to read over and publish hth march 23 2009 at 12 25 pm jordan mccollum said afaik not automatically but if you have them saved as drafts when people email them you can add them before you publish march 23 2009 at 2 29 pm abby annis said rick this blog is such a good idea so very very helpful you are like the coolest evah thanks march 26 2009 at 9 53 am rick daley said thanks abby positive feedback like that keeps me motivated i m very happy with the site so far i ve seen great feedback and many people have been able to use the comments to strengthen their queries march 26 2009 at 10 07 am the screaming guppy said thanks again for running this site rick did you see nathan s blog post about be an agent for a day might be something that will get a few new queries up here april 6 2009 at 1 01 pm suzan harden said rick thanks for the opportunity for feedback this is a cool idea april 15 2009 at 12 58 am rick daley said suzan hosting this site is my pleasure i ve benefited from the peer feedback too i m glad you chose to participate best of luck to you april 15 2009 at 8 00 am rick daley said annette it s actually my 20th revision but i think i finally got it thanks rick i ll distribute the thanks to the many people who have commented on the prior iterations of your query rick april 15 2009 at 9 38 am jen said sorry about the other posts clearly i can t follow directions please post it as the eternal link query letter april 16 2009 at 2 50 pm jen said haha thanks i need it april 16 2009 at 3 00 pm robert a meacham said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 17 2009 at 9 17 pm melissa alexander said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 18 2009 at 2 19 pm robert a meacham said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 19 2009 at 8 11 pm unknown said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 20 2009 at 8 16 pm dawn said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 22 2009 at 2 41 am lori folkman said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 23 2009 at 2 50 pm lori folkman said thanks for the link on jessica s blog i hadn t seen many writing communities dedicated to queries they all focus on the easy part the book thanks for putting this together april 23 2009 at 2 54 pm rick daley said folksinmt it s my pleasure i m glad you found the site and are jumping into the mix april 23 2009 at 3 54 pm weronika janczuk said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 24 2009 at 11 08 pm kat said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 25 2009 at 10 52 am anonymous said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 26 2009 at 8 41 pm kat said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 26 2009 at 11 17 pm jo v said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator april 27 2009 at 9 55 pm unknown said this 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b chicoine said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator may 14 2009 at 7 31 pm j b chicoine said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator may 15 2009 at 9 18 am j b chicoine said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator may 15 2009 at 3 36 pm anonymous said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator may 19 2009 at 7 51 pm anonymous said rick please pass along my apologies to everyone i couldn t hold out for an entire week five days is all i could manage i tried honest may 19 2009 at 7 53 pm rick daley said no need to apologize i haven t posted a new query for many days i m glad to see something cross the submission wires i don t know if you saw the last comment on the fourth revision but it is actually very insightful actually i found it very helpful reading what others had to say and how you applied it i think what you ve learned has also made the critiques you ve offered very helpful may 19 2009 at 8 24 pm j b chicoine said this 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administrator june 19 2009 at 7 05 am rick daley said hi kat i got you covered rick june 19 2009 at 7 46 am katie salidas said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator june 22 2009 at 5 03 pm jen said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator june 28 2009 at 4 01 pm jen said hi rick i forgot to add the eternal link is 80 000 words and ya fantasy but i think you know that by version 4 jen june 28 2009 at 4 12 pm jen said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator june 28 2009 at 6 06 pm rick daley said hi jen i wouldn t take for granted that everyone has read all prior versions i added the genre and word count in at the beginning copied form your prior versions i think it helps for overall flow to know what the first thing the agent reads will be i hope you don t mind in your prior versions that wording and placement was unchanged june 28 2009 at 8 07 pm scott said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator june 29 2009 at 8 09 pm anonymous said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator june 29 2009 at 11 55 pm kori said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 1 2009 at 11 45 am jen said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 2 2009 at 6 30 pm d michael olive said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 3 2009 at 8 45 pm suzan harden said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 4 2009 at 4 12 pm d michael olive said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 4 2009 at 7 44 pm anonymous said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 5 2009 at 9 06 pm d michael olive said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 6 2009 at 5 06 pm unknown said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 6 2009 at 7 47 pm anonymous said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 7 2009 at 11 36 pm james cubby writer said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 8 2009 at 11 33 am regan kirk said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 8 2009 at 12 12 pm regan kirk said hi rick i wanted to post the first five pages of my novel here the query was posted yesterday but it seems that there s far too many characters to fit them in a comment i went ahead and posted the pages on my own blog would you be willing to copy and paste from there onto the slushpile i d really appreciate it the pages are here http theserpentstooth blogspot com 2009 07 wip first five pages html the header would be sample pages a profusion of want thanks so much july 9 2009 at 3 02 am rick daley said hi regan your sample pages are up i have to work on my on ms for a while but i m eager to read your sample later today july 9 2009 at 6 25 am unknown said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 14 2009 at 9 27 pm unknown said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 14 2009 at 9 28 pm ali said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 14 2009 at 9 48 pm anonymous said this comment has been removed by a blog administrator july 16 2009 at 7 48 pm anonymous said rick i just posted the query for the jackpot and noticed an inconsistency samantha s last name should be obeid not khouri throughout if you can fix this great august 6 2009 at 1 29 pm robert a meacham said guess i need to know how to spell corruption august 7 2009 at 7 49 pm stephanie damore said this comment has been removed by the author august 7 2009 at 8 02 pm anonymous said sorry about forgetting the title for that last post rick it should have been a scorpion s nature revision 4 august 14 2009 at 4 37 pm rick daley said anon no problem thanks for the heads up august 14 2009 at 5 31 pm fred limberg said you re getting there stay with it no advice right now as i have been boo hawking boo hogging boo snogging ah having a scotch or three you are getting there q school august 14 2009 at 7 19 pm kayreno said this comment has been removed by the author august 20 2009 at 10 30 pm christine said thanks for providing such a great learning tool it s a fantastic idea and i m glad i wandered over from nathan s blog christine september 3 2009 at 3 10 pm dolorah said ahh sorry rick i forgot to label the above post as not her mother s fate revision 2 should i start again with a whole new post september 8 2009 at 2 00 am rick daley said donna thanks i ve got you covered september 8 2009 at 6 15 am natalie said hi rick i posted my query months ago just after you set up the blog i never reposted but i did revise the query and first five pages about a hundred times based on some of the suggestions you and others gave me i just wanted to say thank you for keeping up this blog i am sure it is a lot of work for you but it is a great service for writers i got the call last week and i m sure it never would have happened without the help of other writers who gave their time to help my manuscript and query be the best it could be hopefully i can repay some of the kindness so thanks september 9 2009 at 11 14 am dolorah said oh no does this mean the third revision didn t save here i deleted one version of it after reading it over and posted a second version and now i don t see it september 11 2009 at 10 01 am rick daley said donna the third revision is up sometimes when i have two to post at the same time i will schedule one out a couple hours so each gets some time at the top of the page and the feeds to google reader are staggered september 11 2009 at 10 48 am dolorah said thanks rick sorry i panicked i m cutting things so close to the wire here procrastination junky you know and i really need it for the workshop on sunday and by the way thanks for this site it has been an immense help dhole september 11 2009 at 8 32 pm a j frey said rick i emailed over my revised sample pages for iron thirst did you receive them if not i ll be glad to resend you re the best ajfrey www aj frey blogspot com october 19 2009 at 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