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the public query slushpile 08 16 09 skip to main skip to sidebar aug 16 2009 query shadow falls revision 1 click here to read the original query dear agent there are people who know sixteen year old willow sinclair s big secret unfortunately willow isn t one of them will senses something strange is going on the first week she starts her new school in the mountains of north carolina for a girl who has spent the first two years of high school successfully blending into the scenery she suddenly is getting a whole lot of attention first the faculty is giving her the hard sell on joining the leadership council the lc an exclusive club of students with ties to the academy s biggest donor a charismatic televangelist the members are supermodel perfect smart as hell and spiritually dedicated although dedicated to what she s not so sure willow can think of nothing she would like to join less then two boys are competing for her interest and warning her about the danger the other one poses will is confused when did a fairy godmother sneak into her room and sprinkle her with desirable dust boys like these would have existed in another orbit from her at her old school in texas finally as if beautiful boys and pushy teachers aren t enough to drive a girl to the edge will starts seeing colors around people and develops the olfactory glands of a bloodhound will needs answers but she s not sure which guy she can trust to help her find them rivers the sweet alabama boy with the killer dimples who also happens to be a member of the lc or pierce the over confident preacher s son with a reputation for preying on new girls and an ax to grind with his father both boys think they know why she s gifted she s goddess touched like they are but neither realizes that willow s gift came at a price before she took her first breath someone made a deal with her soul and now it s time to pay up i am pleased to submit for your consideration my paranormal young adult novel shadow falls complete at 85 000 words thank you for your time and consideration if you would like to learn more about me please visit me at http fictiongroupie blogspot com i look forward to hearing from you sincerely me posted by rick daley at 11 52 am 13 comments labels paranormal young adult query near edgware revision 1 click here to read the original query dear agent i would like to introduce you to my novel near edgware 16 year old jess trainer returns to a school that has changed in everyway except geographically the head doesn t tolerate deviation from his code and the rules jess is glad to be back she just wants to spend time with her friends despite her determination to avoid trouble she can t fight the lure of caleb ridgeway she can see him tell the difference to her he is more than one of the matching set of boys who came with the new headteacher this attraction draws jess inside the world of those born were only after she is attacked by feral were does jess discover that caleb s secret exciting to speculate about is bitingly real given the choice between keeping his secret or losing caleb for good jess decides their love is worth the risk when the feral were attempt to destroy the younger members of the pack specifically caleb they have help on the inside who nearly make that happen the task of saving them all falls on jess which is ironic given the other secret that permeates the book her parents keep from her why she senses when people are more than they seem why she is fast and strong why her visual memory was bred in her they want to end a way of life built on hatred and annihilation they leave it to fate to see what happens when the last born hunter meets the alpha to be an unscrupulous were could see jess ignorance as the perfect opportunity for revenge it s a good job caleb fights for more than the right to love near edgware is complete at 75 000 words it has been written as a stand alone novel but it could be so much more once characters have been established they have been known to develop a loyal following i have planned the outlines for five or infact six further linked stories elements of each have been woven into the book the first three chapters of book 2 are already written and could be ready for perusal with the more polished manuscript described above i am a teacher and use social and emotional aspect of learning seal as the cornerstone of my work i also have a counselling qualification i bring these skills to my writing thank you for your time i hope to hear from you soon yours sincerely posted by rick daley at 10 53 am 5 comments labels guess the genre newer posts older posts home subscribe to comments atom submit queries here submit queries here query and writing resources agentquery com genre descriptions agentquery com how to write a query colleen lindsay word counts and novel length critiquing critiques editorial anonymous tips on your bio janet reid effective query class janet reid how to make sure your query is instantly rejected 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