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d the nephilim existence is a 73 000 word young adult fantasy novel i would be happy to forward the complete manuscript upon request and would like to mention this is a simultaneous query thank for your time and consideration cordially posted by rick daley at 12 30 pm 5 comments labels fantasy young adult query remembering you women s fiction dear ms agent ten years is a long time to live in a self imposed exile and when genna s longing for the familiar turn into nightmares about her future she realizes it s time to go home once there the past comes back to haunt her in the form of her ex fiancé and his dead wife genna s unresolved feelings for him and what he did a decade ago only twist her heart and lead her down a perilous path he wants her back and genna wonders if it s only for her money coming home has also brought her aunt s alzheimer s to light something the family refuses to face her cousin is falling apart under the strain of a too perfect marriage and her best friend is ignoring her genna also finds herself encumbered with an inheritance that threatens to destroy her relationship with her uncle what s a girl to do genna needs to makes some tough decisions regarding her future does she give up the job of a lifetime and come home to work for peanuts or does she go back and live the same lonely life she s had for the last decade and will trying to get over her broken heart lead her to find comfort in the arms of a man she once despised with the help of the only person who has ever put her first genna makes the decisions that will change her life forever i am seeking representation for remembering you a completed work of women s fiction at 87 000 words i have also added a sentence as to why i chose them as the agent thank you for your consideration robin posted by rick daley at 10 46 am 4 comments labels women s fiction query life and beth latest version i ve been sending this out there and getting requests but i keep tweaking it now i m wondering if this last tweak is working seventeen year old rocker beth collins plays a killer lead guitar but that s not what s nabbed her a scholarship to the exclusive hamilton academy it s beth s other killer talent the one for causing death beth is a deathcrafter and hamilton is no ordinary school it s a school for the differently talented in other words freaks like beth at hamilton beth learns to cope with loss attempts to reclaim her dormant muse and falls in in love with a uniquely gifted blind boy but behind the school s nurturing façade lurks danger forced to kill her new boyfriend or risk the loss of everyone else she loves beth must come to terms with her own deadly skills all while facing down a powerful and other worldly headmistress posted by rick daley at 7 45 am 5 comments labels guess the genre jun 9 2010 query bait revised click here to read the original query nothing was more important to aubrey than gaining her freedom but the one man who could give it to her was the last man on earth she could trust aubrey donovan was a successful horse trainer until wrongfully convicted of the vicious slaying of her sister savannah three years behind bars has left her with a seething hatred for the justice system and anyone associated with it special agent levi bishop is head of the fbi task force charged with catching a serial killer dubbed sandman by the press after a year of chasing shadows the bodies of sandman s victims are still turning up but levi is no closer to catching him a break in the case leads levi to aubrey and he realizes immediately that not only was she wrongfully convicted she was likely sandman s intended victim the night her sister was murdered racing against the clock and running out of options levi hates using aubrey as bait but knows it s the only way to bring sandman to justice that s the premise of my recently completed 90 000 word novel bait this gritty suspense tale reminiscent of tami hoag and sandra brown explores murder distrust and impossible attraction in a small louisiana town my writing credits include a published poem and edit of one man crime wave by kasha mona i would be happy to send you sample chapters or a completed manuscript upon request thank you for taking the time to consider my work posted by rick daley at 1 02 pm 5 comments labels suspense jun 8 2010 query winter roses never die click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision click here to read the third revision dear agent at 34 years old jennie is something of an anomaly she loves what some might consider incongruous jesus and fairies she s not religious or mentally challenged but she is a little of what she seeks in the wonderful and strange her shy spiritual over imaginative child like persona makes her appear eccentric masking her kind nature and strong integrity her co workers in the public library sylvia and helen can see she s different but can t decide which side of the wonderful and strange scale she s on when jennie announces she s heard disembodied singing and music while talking shortcuts through the abandoned cemetery and also met a gorgeous man seated beside a wintry rose covered grave her library co workers suspect it is the the strange end of the scale for her and when helen fails to find any roses or any man gorgeous or otherwise in the cemetery where jennie claimed they re always to be found these suspicions are confirmed the growing enmity at work because of her outlandish claims and her inspirationals which she believes are from the divine and also the disappearance from the cemetery of the man she has come to know as charos bring jennie into despair despite his thorny nature charos had shown more understanding for her spiritual imaginative nature than anyone else and jennie had begun to believe he was the prince charming she had always dreamt of meeting gradually her inspirationals lead her into a more positive understanding of people and life and the optimism and courage these inspirationals give enable her to win the admiration of sylvia and helen and even the elusive and potentially dangerous charos her unfailing love and support enables him to see her worth and helps free him from his cursed existence but only the winter roses which never die hold the key to charos surreal past and inspire her to fully understand the reasons for his misdeeds and how he now suffers because of them she also realises that even though there have been many to take blood away there has only ever been one who came to give it and whose words like the magical roses will never die winter roses never die is a paranormal romance of approximately 95 000 words which also combines elements of inspirational christianity thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 7 36 am 7 comments labels paranormal romance jun 7 2010 query a troll wife s tale dear agent snip name i took stock of my injuries i hadn t even been on the job a month and i had 14 bruises a concussion multiple cuts and abrasions a broken bone and now a gunshot wound being a tooth fairy shouldn t be this hard so opens my 95 000 word urban fantasy novel a troll wife s tale when troll wife first becomes a tooth fairy all she can see are the good things she has a steady job she s making friends best of all are the tooth fairy wings and flying after a few days she starts to see the problems she s racking up an impressive number of on the job injuries her friends only accept her because they can t tell she s a troll while she s wearing the wings the wings take away her troll ability to smell a person s character and emotions she notices that going even a day without wearing the wings makes her irritable are the wings addictive if so why it seems that tooth fairies also have enemies oubliette the most efficient soldier in the human fae war hundreds of years ago hasn t given up fighting the war against the humans tooth fairies keep the peace pact with humans and oubliette wants to end that pact oubliette seems determined to convince troll wife of the dangers of humans if oubliette is right is the peace pact actually destroying all the fae when a homeless boy that troll wife has befriended loses his first tooth troll wife has to make sure he keeps the pact before oubliette catches up to him snip reason i m submitting to this agent posted by rick daley at 1 34 pm 12 comments labels urban fantasy jun 6 2010 query bait nothing was more important to aubrey than gaining her freedom but the one man who could give it to her was the last man on earth she could trust that s the premise of my recently completed 90 000 word novel bait this gritty suspense tale reminiscent of tami hoag and sandra brown explores murder distrust and impossible attraction in a small louisiana town aubrey donovan was a successful horse trainer until one tragic night took everything away from her wrongfully convicted of the vicious slaying of her sister savannah she s spent the last three years behind bars nurturing a seething hatred for the justice system and anyone associated with it special agent levi bishop is head of the fbi task force charged with catching a serial killer dubbed sandman by the press after a year of chasing shadows the bodies of sandman s victims are still turning up but levi is no closer to catching him a break in the case leads levi to aubrey and he realizes immediately that he s found the key to finally stopping this madman racing against the clock and running out of options levi is reluctant to use aubrey as bait but knows it s the only way to bring sandman to justice joining forces levi and aubrey fight attraction then for their lives when everything goes according to levi s plan and sandman finally comes a stanford university graduate with a degree in psychology i ve researched extensively spending time in louisiana and visiting the actual prison that the heroine of the story is sentenced to my writing credits include a published poem and edit of one man crime wave by kasha mona i m currently employed as a senior project account manager i would be happy to send you sample chapters or a completed manuscript upon request thank you for taking the time to consider my work posted by rick daley at 3 00 pm 9 comments labels suspense query house dreams i am writing to introduce my novel house dreams for your consideration house dreams is a work of women s fiction about mothers and daughters and about the sometimes destructive power of the imagination the main character lillian is a home health aide who has built her career around choosing assignments that allow her to live briefly in the houses of people much wealthier than herself her devotion is lavished on the houses she can pretend are hers for the duration of her stay while her care for her patients is chilly and efficient as the novel opens lillian arrives at a new house inhabited by a demanding bed ridden elderly woman ellen whitmore but this house is different from the moment she arrives lillian finds the house and everything in it strangely familiar as the days go by she is drawn deeper into her fantasy of possessing the house the arrival of ellen s daughter and teenage granddaughter is an unwelcome interruption for lillian ellen and her daughter carlotta have been estranged since carlotta s marriage and ellen has never met her granddaughter maggie carlotta s relationship with ellen remains remote but maggie is entranced by her grandmother s stories of her youth maggie also tries to befriend lillian although lillian is irritated by maggie s mannerisms intrusiveness and aura of privilege life for the four women settles into a routine of fragile alliances until a sudden crisis in ellen s health forces lillian to realize that the imaginary home and family she has built for herself are necessarily impermanent ellen is failing and carlotta and maggie will be leaving in time for maggie to start school in the fall lillian will have to return to her life of brief sojourns in other people s houses carlotta and ellen have several confrontations about carlotta s marriage and about carlotta s unhappy childhood as her relationship with carlotta deteriorates ellen starts to hint that she may leave the house to lillian ellen is hoping for lillian s attention and loyalty but that temptation and her passion for the house lead lillian down a very different and dangerous path house dreams is my first novel portions of my first book a short story collection have appeared in kalliope and pms and in the anthology prompted i have had other short fiction published on line i am currently at work on my second novel posted by rick daley at 12 00 pm 8 comments labels women s fiction query silver squirrel and the crucible of silver silver squirrel realized that the hawk was planning something terrible for him ever since she attacked his friend morning the crow and left her in his care this relationship he had with the crows got him in a lot of trouble with the community with his girlfriend and now with the hawk his plan to save the community was a good one but somehow it all went wrong now lives are shattered and here he is caught in the hawk s talons why didn t she kill him silver could only wonder our leg bones lock into place that s how we sleep while perched the hawk said i could die of old age and rot and you still won t escape my grip the hawk is a smart one but silver s experience with the birds might help if he can only put together the pieces of the puzzle before it s too late silver squirrel and the crucible of silver is a coming of age novel completed at 75 000 words two additional silver squirrel novels are also completed i have been published in several trade publications including keyframe magazine i studied screen writing and have completed three novels i worked in special effects for film star trek spiderman 2 and published software and documentation for the animation industry for a number of years thank you for your time and consideration posted by rick daley at 9 00 am 3 comments labels guess the genre query a tale of youth and sorrow revised click here to read the original query dear x i visited agency name s website and noticed that you are interested in ya and fantasy projects a tale of youth and sorrow my 53 400 word novel might interest you traumatized by the death of her mother two years prior twelve year old potioneer minette bublee would like nothing more than the approval of her guardian the master thief ilona njis then one day minette saves the life of a victim of a brutal beating one who utters to her one name in warning belphelial it is a name that spurs ilona to explode with unprecedented viciousness shattering minette s faith in their friendship and hurtling the thief down a path of self destruction in a race to save ilona from herself minette unwittingly draws the attention of arcane forces permitting her a glimpse into her world s tumultuous history through the eyes of a 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