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indsey to the realm in between where they relive memories together in vivid detail the brutal jacobite rebellion of 1719 that led to aiden s death a ball at the palace of versailles before king louis xiv and even an outing to seattle in the 21st century but even as she s falling for him heaven s siren song is intensifying pulling lindsey away aiden is unable to go with her for reasons he is unwilling to divulge when she is revived at the scene of the accident lindsey is left to pick up the pieces of her old life and find out if love really can transcend all boundaries between a ya crossover novel is complete at 80 000 words thank you for taking the time to consider representing my work i look forward to hearing from you sincerely cyndi tefft posted by rick daley at 10 10 am 8 comments labels young adult aug 6 2010 query reluctant queen dear super agent nitokerty never wanted to be pharaoh until her brother was murdered the gods have turned their backs on egypt the harvests are poor the pharaoh weak and the nobility grown too powerful as the pharaoh s youngest and most spoiled daughter nitokerty is forced to serve the temples in an attempt to appease the gods but they have other plans for her nitokerty returns to court when her father dies and falls in love with anum a mysterious courtier when her older sister dies in childbirth custom dictates nitokerty must marry her brother anum secretly plots to overthrow her brother and has him murdered when her brother is assassinated nitokerty seizes the double crown to seek revenge not knowing the traitor is anum the man she thought she loved her final act of revenge guarantees her name will be remembered by history inspired by a single line from the histories of herodotus reluctant queen is the story of one of egypt s only female pharaohs it is historical fiction complete at 85 000 words i am a history teacher who has traveled to egypt twice in order to better tell nitokerty s story i have completed a second novel set in ancient egypt and am currently at work on another on the byzantine empire thank you for your consideration i look forward to hearing from you posted by rick daley at 4 03 pm 7 comments labels historical fiction aug 5 2010 query haven ya revised click here to read the original query scar thought she was normal that was before she was deemed too dangerous to fit into normal society it s not her fault her mother got a little too close to a vampire and suddenly she s whisked away to a reform school for witches werewolves and vampires as if surviving a paranormal reform school wasn t bad enough scar learns the hard way that breaking a witch s frisbee can really piss him off challenging a werewolf to a foot race is a bad idea especially if you want to live vampires hold serious grudges equipped with mean left hooks and sometimes the hardest secrets to keep are the most deadly especially if that secret is your own scar is the vilest creature that could ever exist half human when students begin to disappear scar starts seeing visions of the attacks if that wasn t strange enough a mysterious incriminating video surfaces placing scar at one of the crime scenes making her the prime suspect now she must race to prove her innocence before her true nature is exposed the only problem is that she s not entirely sure she s innocent posted by rick daley at 12 00 pm 2 comments labels young adult query emma s heaven contemporary women s fiction revised click here to read the original query thanks for everyone s help there s only one thing megan wants to find her missing daughter when she does no one believes her after her two year old daughter walked out of their front door and disappeared in the space of a few moments megan s world crumbled in the two years since there have been tons of sightings all by megan herself but no one believes her after all why should they the child was never emma her husband counselor her own mother and even megan herself fear she s delusional however at the local town fair megan sees her holding hands and laughing with an elderly couple her daughter emma megan can t reach them and the only trace she s left with is a photo she manages to snap before they vanish the police feel she s cried wolf too many times unable to handle the constant heartache of all the false sightings megan s husband threatens to walk away but megan isn t willing to give up armed with only a photo and motherly instinct megan questions whether she s closing in on the people who took her child or if she s giving up everything to chase an illusion posted by rick daley at 9 00 am 2 comments labels women s fiction aug 4 2010 remembering you women s fiction third revison and hopefully the last click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision returning home to bristol rhode island for the annual fourth of july parade for the first time in ten years genna is excited to share the great news about her fantastic promotion a goal she s been working toward all her life as executive kitchen manager of a swanky delaware country club she isn t home five minutes before trouble starts when she sees tony her ex fiancé at her uncle s diner although everyone says he s no good genna can t see through her memories clearly enough to discern if they re right problems escalate as genna discovers her aunt may have alzheimer s and no one in the family wants to deal with it one cousin is hysterical another completely shuts down and in the midst of all this her beloved uncle has a heart attack genna finds keeping her uncle s diner open during the busiest time of the year is more than just hard work it has always been in her blood and she questions if she should give up her fantastic new job offer to stay in bristol and take care of her family and the diner tony is also pushing her to stay but when little petie dicampo appears all grown up and looking like a calendar boy she wonders if he could be the man to finally get her over tony but tony isn t giving up that easily genna figures out all the answers to her family s problems before she goes back to delaware she also decides living without love is not in her future the problem is which man will she choose remembering you is a completed work of women s fiction at 87 000 words posted by rick daley at 11 08 pm no comments labels women s fiction query hidden in shadows i would love for you to consider hidden in shadows a 96 000 word urban fantasy romance novel lorna mccloud is an assassin hell bent on avenging her father s murder only she has no leads soon she has more important issues to deal with than whether to use a dagger or a gun to kill her next target first she s captured by the paranormal intelligence agency a shady clandestine organization a pia henchman tells lorna that she has the ability to create and hide in artificial shadows a power she had unknowingly used during her nightly killings lorna distrusts the agency and manages to escape then lorna heads to a small island where many of her potential clients want the king dead lorna hasn t felt the stirrings of love in a long time but something about the noble alaric makes her long for the light after her lifetime spent in shadow torn between murder and love lorna has never been able to escape her past or her ardent desire for revenge and now they may prevent her from her only chance of living a normal happy life i am the author of a medieval fantasy romance series the kingdom of arnhem woman of honor 2009 and knight of glory 2010 published with desert breeze publishing i have also sold six short stories for anthologies two of which are under the pen name nicolette zamora thank you so much for your time and consideration and i look forward to hearing from you posted by rick daley at 5 00 pm 1 comment labels romance urban fantasy query emma s heaven women s fiction there s only one thing megan wants to find her missing daughter then when she does no one believes her when her two year old daughter walked out of their front door and disappeared in the space of two minutes megan s world crumbled in the two years since there have been tons of sightings all by megan herself but no one believes her after all why should they not once was the child she saw her daughter her husband her counselor her own mother and even megan herself fear she s delusional but then at the local town fair megan sees her holding hands and laughing with an elderly couple her daughter emma megan can t reach them and the only trace she s left with is a photo she managers to snap before they vanish the police feel she s cried wolf too many times unable to handle the constant heartache of all the false sightings megan s husband threatens to walk away from their marriage but megan isn t willing to give up armed with only a photo and mother instinct megan risks her marriage and sanity to pursue the girl in the photograph as she pieces together the disorienting trail megan begins to question whether she s closing in on the people who took her child or if she s giving up everything to chase an illusion thanks everyone for your help posted by rick daley at 11 43 am 6 comments labels women s fiction query the hunted of 2060 revised click here to read the original query here is a re_write thanks to comments please let me know if i am any closer the hunted of 2060 paranormal chicklit with a side of scifi 85 000 words america 2060 three lovers two species one way to survive an original dark paranormal chick lit with a side of sci fi nineteen year old april discovers the secrets within herself are the very secrets that are being hunted by a group dubbed the rogue militia as april uncovers that she is a mixed of human and alien dna she finds herself on a dangerous path of self discovery belonging to a hybrid species on the verge of extinction at university robert the love of her life is put at risk as she struggles with who she was and who she is becoming while a hybrid family she never knew existed enters her life a hybrid male pursues her and her existence becomes a cat and mouse game with enemies she will have to outrun outfight or outwit to survive under general raul the military has no mercy for a foreign species that invaded earth in 2020 and when april realizes the general has secrets of his own which have robbed her of her birth mother grandfather and involve stolen hybrid dna she knows she must save more than herself or the world will fall into the hands of a madman with underlining themes of how prejudice breaks human connections and a theme of wildlife conservation april speaks to the core of what makes us human fans of gena showater s teen alien huntress and maggie steifvarter s shiver as well as fans of the movie cursed starring josh jackson and fans of keri arthur s riley jenson series will enjoy this hunted of 2060 series posted by rick daley at 6 43 am 3 comments labels chick lit paranormal science fiction aug 2 2010 contest alert attention slushpile followers julie cross a long time slushpile follower who i think holds the record for the most submissions is co sponsoring a contest and among the prizes are query and page critiques from an actual agent an editor and others in the publishing industry note others in the publishing industry is my way of saying interns and assistants but is not meant to belittle their professional opinions they know what their agents like julie s novel tempest once titled enemies of time has been sold resulting in a 3 book deal she is represented by agent suzie townsend of fineprint lit check julie s blog for details and good luck posted by rick daley at 3 32 pm 3 comments labels contest query ever ya paranormal dear ______ waking up in a coffin hungry for blood is only the beginning for sixteen year old everly blue things are about to get a lot worse first she finds out from the hot guy who dug her up that she s a vampire well half vampire not that there s much difference then she meets her maker devon the thousand year old vampire who turned her into a monster he gives her a shred of hope kill 100 vampires to save her humanity so with the help of chance the hottie who saved her and who she s falling for fast ever sets out to get her life back but it won t be easy she has to deal with her feelings for chance her hatred for devon some new found vampire hunting friends and that pesky taste for blood that just won t leave her alone in the end ever faces a battle and a decision that will change her life forever my young adult novel ever is complete at 70 000 words i think fans of supernatural hits like twilight and vampire academy will enjoy this story of a girl thrown into a life of danger and romance the full manuscript is available should you be interested thank you so much for your time and consideration and i look forward to hearing from you posted by rick daley at 8 45 am 1 comment labels paranormal young adult aug 1 2010 query the hunted of 2060 the hunted of 2060 paranormal sci fi romance 85 000 words america 2060 three lovers two species one way to survive an original dark paranormal sci fi romance about a nineteen year old sophomore who discovers the secrets within herself are the very secrets that are being hunted by a group dubbed the rogue militia as april uncovers that she is in fact a hybrid mixed with human and alien dna she finds herself on a dangerous path of self discovery belonging to a species on the verge of extinction at alaska university robert the love of her life is put at risk as she struggles with who she was and who she is becoming while a hybrid family she never knew existed enters her life a hybrid male pursues her and her existence becomes a cat and mouse game with enemies she will have to outrun outfight or outwit to survive under general raul s orders the military alliance has no mercy or compassion for a foreign species that invaded earth in 2020 and when april realizes the general has secrets of his own which have robbed her of her birth mother grandfather and involve stolen hybrid dna she knows she must save more than herself or the world will fall into the hands of a madman with the help of her grandfather colonial marn and the family of hybrids april eventually destroys general raul and the shifter counterinsurgency military within homeland security the alliance the hybrids dubbed the rogue militia after much sacrifice and loss though in the end april and robert are finally free of the rogue militia and a new life is born from april s womb the two realize in the wake of public suspicion and prejudice destroying the rogue militia was just the beginning with underlining themes of how prejudice breaks human connections and a theme of animal wildlife conservation this novel will leave the reader flipping through the pages of april s story though a hybrid she speaks to the very core of what makes us human fans of gena showater s teen alien huntress and maggie steifvarter s shiver as well as fans of th...