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a s problems escalate as she discovers her aunt may have alzheimer s and no one in the family wants to deal with it angie is hysterical over a bad pap smear and a broken marriage robby completely shuts down when he finds out his plaid and pearl wearing girlfriend is pregnant to put the icing on the cake her beloved uncle has a heart attack genna finds keeping her uncle s diner open during the busiest time of the year is more than just hard work it is in her blood and she questions if she should give up her new job in delaware to stay in bristol and when little petie dicampo appears all grown up and looking like a calendar boy she wonders if he could be the man to finally break down the walls she s built around herself since the night her parents were killed by a drunk driver when she was a kid in twenty one days genna figures out all the answers to her family s problems before she heads back to delaware she also decides living without love is not in her future the problem is which man will she choose remembering you is a completed work of women s fiction at 87 000 words posted by rick daley at 9 55 pm 5 comments labels women s fiction seaweeds query version 4 click here to read the original query click here to read the first revision click here to read the second revision an unusual love triangle arises between a young man a mermaid and a siren in seaweeds a 65 000 word contemporary fantasy sky hunter s twenty third birthday brings him a boat party strange presents and a hook up with sexy melanie an evening of pleasure turns into a night of survival when sky falls off the boat and nearly drowns he is rescued by a mermaid and winds up on the beach the next morning disoriented and having no clue what saved him until he discovers a girl with violet eyes washed up nearby she can t speak and has trouble walking sky believes the girl is the mermaid why she is a human now bewilders him but her charm and innocence draws him to help her sky is poetic so he calls her pearl because she comes from the ocean and in a few short days sky falls head over heels for her he s not bothered by her strange behaviors such as hitting the car horn whenever they go for a ride or eating all his cat s sardines in fact they make her all the more enjoyable to be around because he never knows what to expect like when she dances at his sister s wedding or when her first words are love pearl love sky there s just one problem melanie is livid about sky s new girlfriend she slaughters his cat and threatens to murder his family if he chooses to stay with pearl sky refuses to give in to melanie s threats certain that he can outsmart her but when he discovers that melanie is a siren who has to seduce a man before feeding him to the ocean he must find a way to resist her advances long enough to save himself and pearl seaweeds is the little mermaid meets fatal attraction thank you for your time and consideration i ve gotten so much help already and i really feel my query is close to being ready for agents but i m still torn with a couple of lines such as sky is poetic so he calls her pearl because she comes from the ocean i also have a new paragraph in the middle thanks posted by rick daley at 5 00 pm 3 comments labels fantasy nonfiction query einstein s gift the engineering of lucid dreams what if you were given a set of cognitive tools that enabled you to lucid dream any conceivable experience with precision what if these tools not only opened up a brand new area of experience but also unified previously disparate facts in the fields of science art theory and consciousness studies einstein s gift the engineering of lucid dreams unifies disparate facts in three fields of study in the field of science empirical evidence proves that our senses do not perceive objects rather they detect an abstraction that philosophers call raw sense data or more accurately abstract sense data in the field of art the advent of cubist painting 1910 1912 is braque and picasso s unconscious acknowledgement that the senses perceive an abstraction this acknowledgement continues through the movements of modern art and continues into post modern and contemporary art in the forty year old field of consciousness studies the fact that the senses perceive abstract sense data lays an empirical foundation for a radically new kind of science a first person science of consciousness handling abstract sense data allows anyone who is interested the ability not only to choose the contents of their lucid dreams before hand but also to experience themselves in two places at one time einstein s gift is a must have for lucid dreamers artists academics and anyone interested in the nature of consciousness a first person science of consciousness attempts to bring the spiritual back into science and is one of academia s hottest new fields of study roger penrose dan lloyd and douglas r hofstadter all contemporary academic scholars involved in attempts to establish a first person science of consciousness are employing narrative non fiction as a means to explain their theories of consciousness unlike their books which define and philosophize the nature of consciousness einstein s gift narrates actual first hand experiences from the author s own engineered lucid dreams the engineering of lucid dreams eschews narrating details of the author s personal day to day life and instead utilizes a fictional but academic dialogue between two characters the first character is a college student studying abstract art a portrayal of the author learning how to engineer lucid dreams the second is einstein based on the historical albert einstein 1879 1955 whose intellectual commentary and guidance are based upon 17 years of the author s academic and shamanic study in the classic aristotle vs socrates dialogue and debate the young painter and einstein argue over the existence of abstract and imaginary sense data the nature of postmodern art the movements of modern art the disappearance of the avant garde and the exquisite nature of engineered lucid dreams the engineering of lucid dreams unifies a new cognitive understanding of abstract art with the contemporary academic attempt to establish an empirical basis for a first person science of consciousness the book confronts many of the time tested and treasured ideas about god evolution the nature of reality the nature of dying and very definition of what it means to be alive the author s first hand lucid dreaming experiences demonstrate how he answered his big speculative questions where did the neanderthals go can human consciousness experience the ultraviolet spectrum what happened at the beginning of the universe can we be aware of the atoms in our own bodies in addition einstein s gift offers controversial answers to long standing academic questions what is the purpose of abstract art why is abstract art the dominant feature of the last 100 years of art what is the function of consciousness what is consciousness einstein s gift is the fruition of over 17 years of shamanistic practice and academic study earning the author a bfa in fine arts from the university of arizona and an ma in art theory history and criticism from prescott college he has presented his theory of consciousness at the world renowned 2006 2008 and 2010 tucson consciousness conferences he has over 14 years of southwestern gallery showings where he talks about and introduces people to the idea that the power of abstract art is incredibly miscalculated einstein s gift the engineering of lucid dreams offers readers interested in art science and consciousness a highly compelling argument and jaw dropping lucid dream experiences the book will be 55 000 words contain a bibliography photographic reproductions of 7 15 paintings the manuscript and all required copyright clearance will be completed three to six months or sooner upon receipt of advance chapters 4 8 of 11 are undergoing a professional edit chapters 1 3 will 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